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Your load of bullcrap's like no other,
You think I'm smart,
I know you're dumb.
You were all I ever wanted,
Summed up in one person,
You blew it all away for her.
I hope you two are miserable,
I hope she cheats on you,
I hope that she leaves you for another.
Maybe your heart will hurt,
Maybe your eyes will water,
All I can say is you deserve it.
You lead me to believe,
I was your one and only,
Only to find out you lied.
I wish I could make you feel,
The same pain I did.
But the only way to do that is,
Let you watch me stand tall.




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HollerGirl26 said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 10:55 am:
Loved the ending, great job :)
 
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1heart_broken.kidsz said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 12:21 pm:

It takes a real person to post this...

... Hope all goes well for ya' (:

 
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Karma_Crow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 7:57 am:

I'm sorry for this happeend to you. Realationships are bullock. As well.

 

Keep up the good work. ^^

I ask once more of one thing...if you can look at my writing. Rate it/coment, it does not matter.

 
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veronique said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 5:03 pm:
I LOVED the last line of this! that is so true(: you deserve way better than him!
 
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htrae22 said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 6:30 pm:
  i loved this the last sentence was great and keep writing
 
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