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Mr. Big football star tries to be a bully,
He's got the teachers and all his friends on his side.
He lives by the rules of god and he doesn't understand,
He's nothing but a tool, trying to play us all for a fool, and i won't go down.

He tells me I'm bound for hell.
There's nothing left for him but his soul to sell,
He gave up his mind and humanity,
Does he know his entire life is a lie?

Mr. Big football star has no power, his brain is fried, and he believes the lie.
He does everything for his god.
I bet he doesn't know he's just wasting time.

Mr. Big football star doesn't know who he really is.
Mr. Big football star has been instructed on what to be by god.
Mr. Big football star has no guts, he's got them all fooled.

Mr. Big football star doesn't fool me.
Mr. Big football star doesn't scare me.
Mr. Big football star isn't who he seems to be.
Mr. Big football star is just a scared little boy.



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imrighthereyouknow said...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 4:21 pm

good work :)

Comments: It didn't really have a rhythm, and it was a little confusing.

 
lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 3:23 pm
What you have here is really good! Sure, it's a little stereotypical, but sometimes that's just the way life is. The way you worded some of these also made it a little hard to follow and understand. It would be nice to know more about "Mr. Big Football Star" and examples of what he does and why he causes you to believe he this is what he is truly like instead of what everyone else believes. Keep up the good work :)
 
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