Her Silent Cry

December 20, 2010
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She walks through life
With her head held high
Greeting pain face-to-face with
Her silent cry

Her shoulders won’t shake
Tears won’t run down her cheeks
Yet if you look closely you can see
Her silent cry

You won’t hear a shout
Nor any complaint
But it echoes in her eyes
Her silent cry

So continue walking by her
You won’t hear if you don’t try to
Though it’s too loud to endure
Her silent cry

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NumberFour said...
Dec. 23, 2012 at 11:37 pm
really good
firewithdoves said...
Apr. 27, 2012 at 5:27 pm

This is so beautiful and really really amazing. You're so talented

Write on, girl!

SilverLuna said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 4:13 pm

This truly is a fantastic work. It's very, very realistic and honest.


Ah, Thorny... :(

SilverLuna replied...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 4:13 pm
I miss you, A LOT.
Atrissa This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 12:22 pm
LUNA! i miss thorny too! and you :)
Atrissa This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 16, 2011 at 5:22 pm
Thorny i love it!!!! :) its sad and true and i really love it :)
flawless200This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 4:43 pm
I LOVE IT !!!1
OffMyRocker... said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 7:37 pm
Oh my stars! This was incredible, I love it so much. I have absolutely nothing bas to say :)
ForeverFelix said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 12:32 pm
Great job thorn =) you're still as good a writer as I remember!
ThatClarinetPerson said...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 7:55 pm
Ha! I was the first to comment, at least. It is awesome. As always :)
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