By Your Side

November 22, 2010
By .AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
.AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
62 articles 7 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.” -James Dean
"You can say whatever you want about me, but I am the only one that knows the truth"


No matter when
No matter where
No matter why
I’ll be there

When you’re feeling lost
When you’re feeling down
I’ll be by your side
Faster than the speed of sound

No matter the time
No matter the place
No matter the date
I’ll be your saving grace

When you’re feeling confused
When you’re feeling left behind
I’ll be by your side
Faster than the blink of an eye

No matter the cost
No matter the weather
No matter the distance
We’ll be together

When you’re feeling alone
When you’re feeling angry
I’ll be by you side
Faster than lightening

I’ll never quit
I’ll never stray
I’ll be by your side
Until the day

When you can walk on your own
When you can spread your wings and fly
When you can touch the stars
When you don’t need me by your side

When you’re feeling complete
When you’re feeling alive
I’ll still be with you
But no longer by your side

When you feel happy
When you feel free
I’ll be there for you
Whenever you need me

To put a smile on your face
To wipe the tears away
To make you laugh
To make your pain fade

There’s no need to say goodbye
Because I’ll never part
But if you ever need me
Just look inside your heart

I’ll be there


The author's comments:
I wrote this after having a dream about helping someone who was in rehab for depression.

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im_me BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2010 at 3:14 pm
im_me BRONZE, Lakeview, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
“When one door of happiness closes, another opens; But often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one that has been opened for us”

if u could check my work out it would be great not many people do beside family n they only commented when using my profile so it looks like i commented but it wasnt me! so if u could please take a look at my poems it would help! thanks

.AKA. DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 6:10 pm
.AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
62 articles 7 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.” -James Dean
"You can say whatever you want about me, but I am the only one that knows the truth"

Thanks! I would love to see your work. :)

.AKA. DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 6:09 pm
.AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
62 articles 7 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.” -James Dean
"You can say whatever you want about me, but I am the only one that knows the truth"

Thanks! I'm glad I made you smile. :)

on Dec. 9 2010 at 8:57 pm
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
34 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful

This is sooooo amazing!!!! Well written i wish i culd give it more stars(: lol check out my stuff i would really like your opinion on sum of it(:

im_me BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 8:18 pm
im_me BRONZE, Lakeview, Michigan
4 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When one door of happiness closes, another opens; But often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one that has been opened for us”

I loved this! great job. this poem made me smile. I think alot of people need this.

.AKA. DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 3:59 pm
.AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
62 articles 7 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.” -James Dean
"You can say whatever you want about me, but I am the only one that knows the truth"

Thanks! :) I can see where it is toward a best friend and being there for them. Also, I could say I wrote this after my dream and thought it was related but it might not have been. I really appreciate your comment though. :)

.AKA. DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 3:50 pm
.AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
62 articles 7 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.” -James Dean
"You can say whatever you want about me, but I am the only one that knows the truth"

Thanks for commenting. I appreciated it. :)

SBM706 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 3:11 pm
SBM706 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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I like how you used repetition through out your poem, but it wasn't the same repetition the whole entire time to where it got aggravating. I could feel a beat going on in my head as I read your poem. I couldn't tell this was towards someone who was depressed though. I thought you wrote it towards a best friend. 

703mmc BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 3:03 pm
703mmc BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

I like the constant repetition you had through out the entire poem. I liked how each stanza had it's own repetition in it. It created a beat in my head as I read it. I also liked how some poems rhymed, but there was really no exact rhyme scheme. 

 



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