Far Away

November 10, 2010
By Manderz PLATINUM, Conesville, Iowa
Manderz PLATINUM, Conesville, Iowa
46 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Say What You Need to Say, And It's Never Too Late.


Kissing you in my dreams.
Since I held you last forever it seems.
But the only thing thats keeping.
In my dreams while I'm sleeping.

Is my thoughts and prayers.
And I wish I was there.
Girl I'll love you with all my might.
And I wish I was in your arms tonight.

Feelings I'm afriad to show.
And the side of me no one knows.
The darkest part of my life.
Is when I close my eyes at night.
Love is the price we pay.
When we're so far away.

Girl never shed a tear.
Remember in your dreams I'm here.
Just like the air I breathe.
Your love is all I need.

[Chorus]

Dreams may be for pretend.
But my love for you will never end.
The only thought in my head.
Is only you girl so a tear don't shed.

[Chorus 2x]



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on Nov. 28 2010 at 4:40 pm
StormyxD SILVER, Winter Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Late at night my mind would come alive with voices and stories and friends as dear to me as any in the real world. I gave myself up to it, longing for transformation." - Jo March, Little Women

WOW. I'm surprised how much I love this. I've been in that place before, and you've captured the feeling into words. I can already imagine how beautiful it would sound with music to go with them. I hope you keep writing. :)

on Nov. 28 2010 at 3:11 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

I absolutly loved this! Personally I think it's so incredibly hard to write song lyrics, but you are really good at it! It flows so easily and I like the metaphors in it too!! Keep it up!

on Nov. 27 2010 at 9:09 am
Manderz PLATINUM, Conesville, Iowa
46 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Say What You Need to Say, And It's Never Too Late.

thanks for your thoughts of my work maybe u should swap emails so we can write each other.

on Nov. 26 2010 at 5:38 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


~Unknown~

This is so beautiful, i felt the love story as i read it.


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