Far Away

November 10, 2010
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Kissing you in my dreams.
Since I held you last forever it seems.
But the only thing thats keeping.
In my dreams while I'm sleeping.

Is my thoughts and prayers.
And I wish I was there.
Girl I'll love you with all my might.
And I wish I was in your arms tonight.

Feelings I'm afriad to show.
And the side of me no one knows.
The darkest part of my life.
Is when I close my eyes at night.
Love is the price we pay.
When we're so far away.

Girl never shed a tear.
Remember in your dreams I'm here.
Just like the air I breathe.
Your love is all I need.


Dreams may be for pretend.
But my love for you will never end.
The only thought in my head.
Is only you girl so a tear don't shed.

[Chorus 2x]

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StormyxD said...
Nov. 28, 2010 at 4:40 pm
WOW. I'm surprised how much I love this. I've been in that place before, and you've captured the feeling into words. I can already imagine how beautiful it would sound with music to go with them. I hope you keep writing. :)
writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 28, 2010 at 3:11 pm
I absolutly loved this! Personally I think it's so incredibly hard to write song lyrics, but you are really good at it! It flows so easily and I like the metaphors in it too!! Keep it up!
echome94 said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 5:38 pm
This is so beautiful, i felt the love story as i read it.
FiveShy replied...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 9:09 am
thanks for your thoughts of my work maybe u should swap emails so we can write each other.
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