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Repetition

By , Rosamond, CA
It whispers, help me
Trapped in a world It can hear
but cannot see
This room, screams memories
In the dark are the shadows
The people we used to be

[Chorus]
Your mind
sleeps right next to mine
So tired, so fragile
And there’s nothing I can do
I’m just as weak as you

It whispers, set me free
Constricted against the past
It pleads
let me go
I want to forget
all that I know

[Chorus]
Your mind
sleeps right next to mine
So tried, so fragile
And there’s nothing I can do
I’m just as weak as you

If this is what keeps me alive
I want to fall asleep
and never wake up
If this is why you cry
and take hold of my sleeve
I can’t keep doing this
I can’t keep doing this
I can’t keep doing this

[Repeat Chorus]

It whispers, let me be
This is the difference
between you and me
I can’t keep doing this





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C.Jaee said...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 9:27 am
Oh, this is b e a u t i f u l . ! Keep Working on things like this . !!!
 
Jocelynn replied...
Nov. 20, 2010 at 11:15 pm
Thanks so much for the feedback (:
 
C.Jaee replied...
Nov. 22, 2010 at 7:45 am

No problem . 

Would you read some of my posts . ?

 
Jms111 replied...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 3:37 pm
sure, I'm not sure how though. haha. Can you please send me the link and I'll definitely check it out. (:
 
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