For the Broken-Hearted MAG

September 1, 2010
By amyscarlett BRONZE, Santa Monica, California
amyscarlett BRONZE, Santa Monica, California
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Exit smiling. - From Catch 22


I hope
That you move away from here,
Meet a nice girl
Who seems sincere,

I hope
When you take her out to dinner that you hold her hand,
And you kiss her softly
On the sand

And I hope
That you start to forget my name
And when you lie together
She tells you that she feels the same

Chorus:
Then I hope she dumps you,
Yeah, I hope she dumps you,
I hope she leaves you picking up the pieces
Of your broken heart
Yeah, I hope she dumps you,
Preferably on Facebook
I'd love to see the way you'd look,
Might be a little like I did
Yeah, I hope she dumps you.

I hope
That you meet some other chick
And she likes Batman just like you,
Yeah, you two click

I hope
That you get that familiar feeling
Yeah, your mind starts reeling
When you see her

And I hope
That you feel like she's the one
Because unlike me and you
You guys have fun …

Chorus:
Then I hope she dumps you,
Yeah, I hope she dumps you,
I hope she leaves you picking up the pieces
Of your broken heart
Yeah, I hope she dumps you,
For another girl on top of that
'Cause let's just face the facts,
You make boys look bad.
Yeah, I hope she dumps you.



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on Jan. 20 2015 at 3:50 pm
Skittles_BeatGirl, Ozark, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let the fear of striking out, Stop you from playing the game

I love this, I think you did an amazing job and keep it up. :)

on Jan. 15 2015 at 11:51 pm
NobodyElse BRONZE, Arlington, Washington
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Excellent :)

on Apr. 27 2013 at 12:46 pm
Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Impossible is not a word, it's just a reason for someone not to try.

i agree with sarah98..... frickin awesome

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2013 at 8:46 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

i totally thought i was one of those "I'm so sweet wanting you to move one" things but then the whole hoping she dumps him made it frickin awesome. 

on Jan. 31 2013 at 10:48 am
KrsytalnBlake14 BRONZE, Vinemont, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
Our love grows stronger every lifetime that passes us through.. (:

you are right it is awesome..(:

on Jan. 31 2013 at 10:47 am
KrsytalnBlake14 BRONZE, Vinemont, Alabama
1 article 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Our love grows stronger every lifetime that passes us through.. (:

yeah it was a awesome poem i really did like it, becuz that is wat i feel like..

Ollieanne GOLD said...
on Sep. 16 2012 at 1:20 pm
Ollieanne GOLD, St. Louis, Missouri
17 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every great dream begins with a dreamer. Always remember, you have within you the strength, the patience, and the passion to reach for the stars to change the world." -Harriet Tubman

hehe:) this is funny!

on Jun. 20 2012 at 11:55 pm
MkArgetlam SILVER, I Dont Kno, Other
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Listen to your Heart..coz its the key for the treasure..
Treasure of Life..

That was awesum! :D

Funny bt deep 


on Apr. 28 2012 at 2:55 pm
iCheeto PLATINUM, Cape Coral, Florida
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This is aweeeesoooom I laughed and it was great!  Its so fun to read and so pointedly aimed at the jerk who hurt you.  Its really good I hope she dumps him too lol ;) Please read some of my work and give me some feed back :)

 


on Apr. 10 2012 at 12:07 pm
Kparker27 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
30 articles 17 photos 101 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end, it's still best to wait for the one we want rather than settle for what's available. It's still best to wait for the one you love rather than to settle for the one who's around. It's still best to wait for the right person, because life's too short to waste on the wrong one."

Great job!! Everyone has put pretty much exactly what I wanted to say... keep it up! :) 

MorganM. said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 9:25 am
MorganM., Gentry, Arkansas
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GIGGLE. Amazing I feel like this about every low down guy. Its really funny. How did you get the idea for this?

ninja17 SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 6:19 pm
ninja17 SILVER, Las Cruces, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes we tend to be in despair when the person we love leaves us, but the truth is, it's not our loss, but theirs, for they left the only person who wouldn't give up on them."

This was deep/funny :) I love the facebook part!

on Nov. 3 2011 at 10:59 pm
Ada Dolan-Zalaznick SILVER, New York, New York
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so funny! I love the twist :D

on Oct. 9 2011 at 9:50 pm
Caban37104 BRONZE, Vineland, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh at me because I'm different, yet I laugh at you because you're all the same.

This is deff one of my favorites..! Great job, hope to hear more from you..! =]

Also check out my page and let me know what you think.. Thanks!


-Duckie- GOLD said...
on Aug. 27 2011 at 6:57 pm
-Duckie- GOLD, West Fargo, North Dakota
18 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your heart is a weapon the size of your fist. Keep fighting. Keep loving.
-Anonymous

And btw, can I get music for it anywhere?

-Duckie- GOLD said...
on Aug. 27 2011 at 6:56 pm
-Duckie- GOLD, West Fargo, North Dakota
18 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your heart is a weapon the size of your fist. Keep fighting. Keep loving.
-Anonymous

YOu get em, girl! this is fantastic and well written and I hope i hear it playing on my radio someday... and I'll say "HEY! I KNOW THIS SONG!"

on Jul. 12 2011 at 7:09 pm
KatrinaCampbell GOLD, Aguadilla, Other
10 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
When God answers your prayers, you have faith in His abilities. When He doesn't, he has faith in YOUR abilities!

This is brilliant!

on Jun. 24 2011 at 2:17 pm
lolxxaddict BRONZE, Doha, Other
2 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring."
— Marilyn Monroe

I Love This :P Specially When You Said "preferably on facebook" & "for another girl on top of that" :) Makes You Feel Great Even When You're Heart-Broken! Great Job <3 

on Jun. 23 2011 at 3:30 pm
14hipkri PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
22 articles 10 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Is that when you get you're thinger off you're thinger?"-Eric Stopper

I totally agree! I think it's amazing!!!

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 6:00 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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HAHAHAHA ohmygod I hope this turns into a song, I'd love to hear this on the radio. Brilliant.


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