You're What I'm Reminded Of

Stand beside my window, and watch the leaves spin til they hit the earth and fly across the yard.

Suddenly I feel your, hand in mine as we're running down the street,

In the middle of fall..

How can one year, change you all the way?

I still miss you, even though I walked away.

How can seasons make you cry because you realize you miss the way it was?

You're what I'm reminded of when autumn comes and blows away the sun. <3



Stand beneath the willow tree, and look up through the branches toward the sky.

And suddenly you're there with me, daring me to climb it wayy too high..

How can two years, change the way you live?

I remember you, but we were just two kids.

When you took my hand and ran with me my whole world shot off fireworks in red and gold.

You're what I'm reminded of when summer stars outshine the midnight cold.



Standing in a baseball field, covered by a midnight starry sky, just you and I, hand in hand.

Then unrealistically, we drew gigantic hearts into the sand.

You asked me if I knew how to dance.

I told you maybe somewhat, then laughed and said no. No I can't..

And then you said I'll teach you someday. You wanna race?

And then we ran.



I was absolutely all the way incredibly happy on that night.

You're what I'm reminded of when fairy tale stories are real life. :)





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GodStrongKid said...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 9:08 pm
I can imagine this with very vivid images. I really enjoyed reading this.
 
Naomi_Rose_333 replied...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 9:50 am
Thanks. :) :) vivid was the intention <3
 
dreamxentertain This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 4:00 pm
I love it!!! I really, really love it! Especially the lines that say "You're what I'm reminded of...".
 
Naomi_Rose_333 replied...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 5:22 pm
thanks so muchh! :)
 
natashajeanne1021 said...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 2:37 am
i loved reading this! and i agree keep writing!! =)
 
Naomi_Rose_333 replied...
Sept. 26, 2010 at 5:23 pm
i definitely will =]
 
Vivallaa said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 11:31 pm
Teach me how to write this way
 
Naomi_Rose_333 replied...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 9:56 am
you just gotta use your imagination. these lyrics are more like a story. Country music usually tells a story. :) so if you listen to country you might get some inspiration.
 
nikkigonefishin said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 10:15 pm
This is really beautiful :) i like how the theme of ur poem relates back 2 the title. Keep writing <3
 
Naomi_Rose_333 replied...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 9:54 am
thank you =] I will. :)
 
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