You're What I'm Reminded Of

September 13, 2010
By Wild_Rebel_Rose DIAMOND, Somerset, Wisconsin
Wild_Rebel_Rose DIAMOND, Somerset, Wisconsin
51 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are, and say what you feel, becuase those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss


Stand beside my window, and watch the leaves spin til they hit the earth and fly across the yard.

Suddenly I feel your, hand in mine as we're running down the street,

In the middle of fall..

How can one year, change you all the way?

I still miss you, even though I walked away.

How can seasons make you cry because you realize you miss the way it was?

You're what I'm reminded of when autumn comes and blows away the sun. <3



Stand beneath the willow tree, and look up through the branches toward the sky.

And suddenly you're there with me, daring me to climb it wayy too high..

How can two years, change the way you live?

I remember you, but we were just two kids.

When you took my hand and ran with me my whole world shot off fireworks in red and gold.

You're what I'm reminded of when summer stars outshine the midnight cold.



Standing in a baseball field, covered by a midnight starry sky, just you and I, hand in hand.

Then unrealistically, we drew gigantic hearts into the sand.

You asked me if I knew how to dance.

I told you maybe somewhat, then laughed and said no. No I can't..

And then you said I'll teach you someday. You wanna race?

And then we ran.



I was absolutely all the way incredibly happy on that night.

You're what I'm reminded of when fairy tale stories are real life. :)


The author's comments:
YOU are what Im reminded of, when fairy tale stories are real life.

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on Sep. 29 2010 at 9:56 am
Wild_Rebel_Rose DIAMOND, Somerset, Wisconsin
51 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are, and say what you feel, becuase those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

you just gotta use your imagination. these lyrics are more like a story. Country music usually tells a story. :) so if you listen to country you might get some inspiration.

on Sep. 29 2010 at 9:54 am
Wild_Rebel_Rose DIAMOND, Somerset, Wisconsin
51 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are, and say what you feel, becuase those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

thank you =] I will. :)

on Sep. 29 2010 at 9:50 am
Wild_Rebel_Rose DIAMOND, Somerset, Wisconsin
51 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are, and say what you feel, becuase those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

Thanks. :) :) vivid was the intention <3

on Sep. 26 2010 at 9:08 pm
GodStrongKid PLATINUM, Parkville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about.

I can imagine this with very vivid images. I really enjoyed reading this.

on Sep. 26 2010 at 5:23 pm
Wild_Rebel_Rose DIAMOND, Somerset, Wisconsin
51 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are, and say what you feel, becuase those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

i definitely will =]

on Sep. 26 2010 at 5:22 pm
Wild_Rebel_Rose DIAMOND, Somerset, Wisconsin
51 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are, and say what you feel, becuase those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

thanks so muchh! :)

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on Sep. 25 2010 at 4:00 pm
Trio123 GOLD, Sunnyvale, California
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I love it!!! I really, really love it! Especially the lines that say "You're what I'm reminded of...".

on Sep. 25 2010 at 2:37 am
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
13 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.

i loved reading this! and i agree keep writing!! =)

on Sep. 24 2010 at 11:31 pm
Vivallaa PLATINUM, NYC, New York
44 articles 89 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
\'Before you stalk and overrun, you can\'t devour anyone.\'

Teach me how to write this way

on Sep. 24 2010 at 10:15 pm
This is really beautiful :) i like how the theme of ur poem relates back 2 the title. Keep writing <3


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