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your arms suround me they protect me they hold me safe and strong
Your lips they caress me they kiss me and love me dear
your eyes peer into me and see my deep soul
your heart makes me whole

My arms long to hold you and they reach when your not near
My lips long for yours and await each tender kiss
My eyes dont see your flaws thy see your perfection I see your problems but I see they make you whole

My heart loves you dearly and never will let you go

our hearts and our existence makes eachother whole again



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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 7:46 pm:
This poem is very well written and comforting. It says a lot about the warmth and dependence of love.
 
Friggi replied...
Aug. 26, 2010 at 8:13 am :

thank you i am very glad when i get feedback. the poem is about love and friendship and the comfort of knowing they are allways there.

i will ead some of your work and give you some feedback if you want

 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 26, 2010 at 3:49 pm :
That would be wonderful.
 
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