glass

By , Holland, MI
Eyes sparkled on,my smile painted ontop of my lips, Who could this person i see be? This world around me is changing me, changing me, All these people are suffocating me, suffocating me.
(All eyes lay on me, im sitting on display watching as they judge me, watching me fall apart, ever so slightly)..chorus
This glass surrounds me as i sit here, i can see their glares, i can see their stares,their glares dont relflect back to them,but i can still see my reflection of a girl in the glass,
(chorus)x2
This world around me is changing me, changing me, this world around me is watching me, waching me, while i sit in this display as they suffocatate me, suffocate me!
(chorus) x2
sitting in this display, their judging me, my breathing as shallow as the decency they know,the crowd jumps up to the glass,theirs no gleam anymore,their masking my shame,but somehow i can still see the reflection of a girl in the glass.





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Seelix said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 10:55 pm
Great job! I could defently feel the emotion, but maybe you could add more lyrics because (depending on the music) it could be a little repetitive.
 
poetic_tragedy replied...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 7:59 pm
thanks...Yeah im working on that, with the music it became repetetive but a girl can only write so fast haha
 
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