Too good to be true

July 12, 2010
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She always says yes

it's never a maybe

i love when she holds me close

and calls me baby

When i tell her i love her

i can see her eyes glow

as we lay in her yard

waist deep in snow

We talk about the future

and how we'll run away

leave our families behind

and be together every day

we decide to do it

we'll run away tomorrow

to end all our pain

and end all our sorrow

as we lay under the stars

i begin to feel weak

i pull her close to my chest

and kiss her on the cheek

she looks up and smiles

and we both begin to blush

i hold her even tighter

as our lips start to touch

It's too good to be true

i start to feel alive

this unbelievable feeling

no word can describe

but the feeling starts to fade

what is going on?

what happened to my girl?

where did i go wrong?

Tears run down my face

When i wake to the alarm

It was all just a dream
And she was never in my arms...

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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 8:53 pm
THis is sooo amazing!! i love it!! If you could please comment and rate my work that would be amazing!! thanks and ur so good!!!
relientkgirlie replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 5:36 pm
This is really're wicked talented :)
Collin13 replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 12:06 pm
really?! thanks:)
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