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i'm gone

I'm slowly losing my mind
don't wanna help me thats fine
i'll always remember what you put me through
i'll constantly remind you
all the hurt and the pain
all the lies you shoved in my face
you broke my heart and you left
now you want back in my arms
thats a dream that seems far
i gave you many chances
gave you all my trust
and i couldn't even get 2 percent of your love
now look whos hurt now
how do you feel now?

do you like your reflection in the mirror?
you purposely try not to see clear
cause you know your in the wrong
and you'll sit in the dark
tryna learn the words to this song

you took me for granted
my love you thought you had it
i don't care what you think
or what your hearts felling
cause you never cared about me
so try to move on
cause baby i'm gone



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Mikky-girlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 10:53 am:
its great...i love it!!!!!!!!
 
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heppychick05 said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 7:50 pm:
i really like this especially the part that says "so try to move on cause baby 'm gone" i really love that part!
 
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crubs3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 8:47 pm:
This is so great!!! it has such great word choice!! If you could please comment and rate my work that would be amazing!! thanks and ur so good!!!
 
drifting_mind replied...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 12:15 am :
i really liked this :)
 
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