i'm gone

July 10, 2010
By dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Dreaming is what makes the world go round"


I'm slowly losing my mind
don't wanna help me thats fine
i'll always remember what you put me through
i'll constantly remind you
all the hurt and the pain
all the lies you shoved in my face
you broke my heart and you left
now you want back in my arms
thats a dream that seems far
i gave you many chances
gave you all my trust
and i couldn't even get 2 percent of your love
now look whos hurt now
how do you feel now?

do you like your reflection in the mirror?
you purposely try not to see clear
cause you know your in the wrong
and you'll sit in the dark
tryna learn the words to this song

you took me for granted
my love you thought you had it
i don't care what you think
or what your hearts felling
cause you never cared about me
so try to move on
cause baby i'm gone


The author's comments:
i wrote this in like 5 minutes so it might suck =) lol i wrote to the beat of Eminem's song "Almost Famous" so i guess its a rap .... i don't know. but i hope you like it and i would love suggestions. it needs a lot of work its not even a full song but it will get their someday =)

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on Aug. 24 2010 at 10:53 am
Monica@Roman SILVER, New Haven, Connecticut
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"This too shall pass"

its great...i love it!!!!!!!!

on Aug. 23 2010 at 7:50 pm
LostInStereo PLATINUM, Phoenixville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Friends are the family you choose.

i really like this especially the part that says "so try to move on cause baby 'm gone" i really love that part!

on Aug. 21 2010 at 12:15 am
drifting_mind SILVER, Augusta, Georgia
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i really liked this :)

on Aug. 9 2010 at 8:47 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so great!!! it has such great word choice!! If you could please comment and rate my work that would be amazing!! thanks and ur so good!!!


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