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Beautiful but insecure
Hiding there behind the door
Hoping there is something more
To this crazy world

She’s all alone she by herself
Wishing there was someone else
To scared to realize
What I see in her eyes

(CHORUS)
And I tried everyway
There’s nothing left to say
I keep waiting on the day
When she opens up her heart to me…

Here I stand in the rain
Trying to end all her pain
People thinking I’m insane but
This is the only way

Cause I don’t know what else to do
Too soon to say I’m through
I think it’s time I hear the truth and
Finally be a part of you
(CHORUS)

I put my heart out on the line
Now you gotta make up your mind
To be with me or say goodbye
This is the final time

Know that I will always care
Know that I’ll always be near
There’s no need to have your fear
Cause I’m right here

And I tried every way…
There was nothing left to say…
I was waiting on today…
When she opened up her heart to me…



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Camel16 said...
Sept. 10, 2010 at 10:54 pm
G.R.E.A.T i want you to play this for me sometime though. This is Billy btw.
 
olican16 said...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 11:41 am

this is really great... i cant play the gituar but i write lyrics and sing them it has a beat but i just dont have any of them set to music yet... all of my songs are pending but check out my poems??

 

 
beautifuldreamer said...
Aug. 7, 2010 at 8:15 pm
i love the first line! does this have a tune?
 
Cajsim replied...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 2:39 pm
Yes it is written with a simple chord prgression that repeats and changes for the chorus... If you wanna know more just ask :D
 
beautifuldreamer replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:14 am
sure!  
 
Cajsim replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 7:52 am

The verse's chord progression is G Em C D. It repeats untill the chorus. Which is

Am D

Am D

Am D

G Em C D

Except for the last D They all line up with the words that ryhme with Say

 
beautifuldreamer replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 4:11 pm
well I'm not so good on guitar but I figured it out, i like it! songs always have more depth when they're more than just words
 
Cajsim replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 8:29 am
Thanks I think it matches the music pretty well....
 
Brittaner said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 9:34 pm
This is good. I like the openess of it. Just don't limit yourself by worrying about if it rhymes or not. Just feel it and sing what everwords come to you. Ok, keep up the good writings
 
Cajsim replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 8:32 am
This one is one of my favorites because the chorus changes to match the music I wrote for it...
 
Brittaner replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 7:55 pm
I can never write music for my songs. I've always just got lyrics and occasionally a beat but I can never get anyfurther so, that's awesome that you've got music too.
 
Cajsim replied...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 2:40 pm
Sad to say, but usually i randomly play chords till i like in then improv words and write them down... then tweak them to tell a story... music comes first for me...
 
Brittaner replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:54 pm
Lucky! All I get are random words or pictures jumping in my head all the time.
 
Cajsim replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 7:52 am
Lol well I get writer's block all the time...
 
Brittaner replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 9:31 pm
well if you need some help just tell me up here and i'll try to help you out.
 
Meago said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 6:50 pm
I remember this song... Good days... I love it..... Is it about Apple Juice girl?? lol
 
Cajsim replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 8:31 am
Nope just a new song...
 
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