Open Up Her Heart to Me

July 7, 2010
By Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa


Beautiful but insecure
Hiding there behind the door
Hoping there is something more
To this crazy world

She’s all alone she by herself
Wishing there was someone else
To scared to realize
What I see in her eyes

(CHORUS)
And I tried everyway
There’s nothing left to say
I keep waiting on the day
When she opens up her heart to me…

Here I stand in the rain
Trying to end all her pain
People thinking I’m insane but
This is the only way

Cause I don’t know what else to do
Too soon to say I’m through
I think it’s time I hear the truth and
Finally be a part of you
(CHORUS)

I put my heart out on the line
Now you gotta make up your mind
To be with me or say goodbye
This is the final time

Know that I will always care
Know that I’ll always be near
There’s no need to have your fear
Cause I’m right here

And I tried every way…
There was nothing left to say…
I was waiting on today…
When she opened up her heart to me…

The author's comments:
I wrote this song on June 20, 2010. It's about a girl who cant decide what she wants and in the end finally reveals her feelings. And those feelings do not include the storyteller... Let me know what ya'll think

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Camel16 said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 10:54 pm
G.R.E.A.T i want you to play this for me sometime though. This is Billy btw.

on Aug. 16 2010 at 11:41 am
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

this is really great... i cant play the gituar but i write lyrics and sing them it has a beat but i just dont have any of them set to music yet... all of my songs are pending but check out my poems??

 


Cajsim SILVER said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 8:29 am
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

Thanks I think it matches the music pretty well....

on Aug. 10 2010 at 9:31 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

well if you need some help just tell me up here and i'll try to help you out.

on Aug. 10 2010 at 4:11 pm
beautifuldreamer GOLD, Hanover, Maryland
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well I'm not so good on guitar but I figured it out, i like it! songs always have more depth when they're more than just words

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 7:52 am
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

Lol well I get writer's block all the time...

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 7:52 am
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

The verse's chord progression is G Em C D. It repeats untill the chorus. Which is

Am D

Am D

Am D

G Em C D

Except for the last D They all line up with the words that ryhme with Say


on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:54 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Lucky! All I get are random words or pictures jumping in my head all the time.

on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:14 am
beautifuldreamer GOLD, Hanover, Maryland
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sure!  

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 2:40 pm
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

Sad to say, but usually i randomly play chords till i like in then improv words and write them down... then tweak them to tell a story... music comes first for me...

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 2:39 pm
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

Yes it is written with a simple chord prgression that repeats and changes for the chorus... If you wanna know more just ask :D

on Aug. 7 2010 at 8:15 pm
beautifuldreamer GOLD, Hanover, Maryland
14 articles 10 photos 59 comments
i love the first line! does this have a tune?

on Aug. 6 2010 at 7:55 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

I can never write music for my songs. I've always just got lyrics and occasionally a beat but I can never get anyfurther so, that's awesome that you've got music too.

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 8:32 am
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

This one is one of my favorites because the chorus changes to match the music I wrote for it...

Cajsim SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 8:31 am
Cajsim SILVER, Reagan, Tennessee
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your gonna be dumb, then you gotta be tough... ~ My Grandpa

Nope just a new song...

on Aug. 3 2010 at 9:34 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

This is good. I like the openess of it. Just don't limit yourself by worrying about if it rhymes or not. Just feel it and sing what everwords come to you. Ok, keep up the good writings

Meago GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 6:50 pm
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
How come when you need something the most- that's the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

I remember this song... Good days... I love it..... Is it about Apple Juice girl?? lol


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