Forever this way!

July 7, 2010
By Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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Ya all are my friends,
but just to say.
I dont care about you,
coz you dont care about me too!
And I know I dont want it this way
I'm tired of being all alone.
Sitting in the corner of the class.

To the the world we are friends,
but i know they misunderstand.
But now it's time for me to sing,
and to spread my wings.

I will not let my life be unfair.
and soon I'll find someone who cares.
And they will never let me fall,
I know i'll find them all,
Yeah!this will happen soon someday,
and i'll not live forever this way


The author's comments:
I don't really have real friends.Its true and I accept it.I sometimes feel sad about it.But I know soon, when I'll leave my school for my +2,I'll get my real friens.
This is a short song about my feelings.Its my first so please don't be rude if you don't like it.

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Shweta SILVER said...
on Sep. 15 2010 at 9:04 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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awwww thanks :)

on Sep. 14 2010 at 4:44 pm
Someone_Who_Is_Loved GOLD, Mount Forest, Other
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Favorite Quote:
This quote is one I made up.....
"You can't climb a mountian without a harness." It means that you can't go where you want to get in life without the help of your friends or family.

I can totally connect with this poem!!!!! All my friends arent really true friends either :$......... And for it being ur first, its pretty good :P

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 8:52 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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Thank you :)

on Aug. 11 2010 at 1:06 pm
ForeverFelix PLATINUM, Catasauqua, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Daydreams can be worse than nightmares, but that never stops me.

I like this =) It's really good for your first poem, and it really says something about part of your perspective on the world...good work!

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 8:39 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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Thank you again....you are a very very good poet too and such a comment means so much for me(it is making me 'BLUSH BLUSH').I'll def keep writing.

on Aug. 11 2010 at 8:28 am
bluerose13 PLATINUM, Oceanside, California
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Favorite Quote:
Live your life to the fullest

it's true! plz keep writing more!!

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 8:26 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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Aww! thank you so so much for calling me a true poet :)

on Aug. 10 2010 at 5:52 pm
bluerose13 PLATINUM, Oceanside, California
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Favorite Quote:
Live your life to the fullest

wow, this poem spoke to me. i do know what that like. it's amazing how well you spoke in this poem. u r a true poet. :)

Flora SILVER said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 2:19 am
Flora SILVER, Allen Park, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Darkness does not always equate to evil, just as light does not always bring good.

you know it.....=)

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 1:53 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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Thanks.It feels great when people understands your feeling behind your poem :)

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 1:52 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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Thank you :)

Flora said...
on Aug. 7 2010 at 9:56 pm
This is nice, and well said...I do know the feeling of that!

on Aug. 7 2010 at 1:02 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Very well said; you articulated your emotion well. I know the feeling that you were writing about very well. But I admire your optimism for rising above it.

on Aug. 6 2010 at 11:39 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

You are so welcome!!! I meant every word:)

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 5:11 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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Thank you very much..it means alot for me coming from you :)

on Aug. 4 2010 at 4:33 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I love the meaning of your poem...you can truly feel your emotion feeding the words as you wrote! Well done! This is amazing for your first poem...oh my mine was horrible!lol You have a talent!

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 11:16 pm
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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And thanks :)

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 11:15 pm
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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In India we call grade 11th and 12th '+2'.My school does not have these grades.So I'll have to leave the school and perhaps the town coz we dont have a single +2 schools right now in here (I live in very small town)

on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:25 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Whats a +2??

on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:25 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow i love this!!! i can so relate.. the person who was my best friend turned into a total witch... alot of ppl did that... but its ok... thats how u find who ur true friends really r.




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