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Ya all are my friends,
but just to say.
I dont care about you,
coz you dont care about me too!
And I know I dont want it this way
I'm tired of being all alone.
Sitting in the corner of the class.

To the the world we are friends,
but i know they misunderstand.
But now it's time for me to sing,
and to spread my wings.

I will not let my life be unfair.
and soon I'll find someone who cares.
And they will never let me fall,
I know i'll find them all,
Yeah!this will happen soon someday,
and i'll not live forever this way




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Someone_Who_Is_Loved said...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 4:44 pm:
I can totally connect with this poem!!!!! All my friends arent really true friends either :$......... And for it being ur first, its pretty good :P
 
nightingle-Shweta replied...
Sept. 15, 2010 at 9:04 am :
awwww thanks :)
 
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CallMeFelix said...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 1:06 pm:
I like this =) It's really good for your first poem, and it really says something about part of your perspective on the world...good work!
 
nightingle replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 8:52 am :
Thank you :)
 
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bluerose13 said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 5:52 pm:
wow, this poem spoke to me. i do know what that like. it's amazing how well you spoke in this poem. u r a true poet. :)
 
nightingle replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 8:26 am :
Aww! thank you so so much for calling me a true poet :)
 
bluerose13 replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 8:28 am :
it's true! plz keep writing more!!
 
nightingle replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 8:39 am :
Thank you again....you are a very very good poet too and such a comment means so much for me(it is making me 'BLUSH BLUSH').I'll def keep writing.
 
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Flora said...
Aug. 7, 2010 at 9:56 pm:
This is nice, and well said...I do know the feeling of that!
 
nightingle replied...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 1:53 am :
Thanks.It feels great when people understands your feeling behind your poem :)
 
FloraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 2:19 am :
you know it.....=)
 
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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2010 at 1:02 pm:
Very well said; you articulated your emotion well. I know the feeling that you were writing about very well. But I admire your optimism for rising above it.
 
nightingle replied...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 1:52 am :
Thank you :)
 
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bluemagnet22 said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 4:33 pm:
I love the meaning of your poem...you can truly feel your emotion feeding the words as you wrote! Well done! This is amazing for your first poem...oh my mine was horrible!lol You have a talent!
 
nightingle replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 5:11 am :
Thank you very much..it means alot for me coming from you :)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 11:39 am :
You are so welcome!!! I meant every word:)
 
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crubs3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 10:25 am:
Wow i love this!!! i can so relate.. the person who was my best friend turned into a total witch... alot of ppl did that... but its ok... thats how u find who ur true friends really r.
 
crubs3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 10:25 am :
Whats a +2??
 
nightingle replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 11:15 pm :
In India we call grade 11th and 12th '+2'.My school does not have these grades.So I'll have to leave the school and perhaps the town coz we dont have a single +2 schools right now in here (I live in very small town)
 
nightingle replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 11:16 pm :
And thanks :)
 
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