Do I miss it?

July 6, 2010
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So now i miss the love

but i dont miss the pain

i miss being by her side

but not taking the blame

I miss staying up dreaming

but i dont miss all the lies

i dont miss the bleeding

and all the tears i cried

So now its summer

and she's out of sight

I dont care about her

yet here i write

Am i writing cause im mad?

am i writing vause im sad?

or is it cause the truth is,

she's the best I've ever had

I miss falling in love

but dont miss the fears

I miss holding you in my arms

But definitly not the tears

Now this is the the end Emily

No matter what you do

I'm gone forever,

Does that sounds familiar to you...?

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Ambs,T said...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 10:06 pm
i don't like that many things but i like this. you sound like a romantic person that's sad and mad about a're not the only yeah i like your work.
mrsneverjonas_899 said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 1:56 pm
that was pretty awesome!! :) i liked it! it was sweet-sounding and it had a strong voice ^^ this would make kool song definitely
Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 9:59 pm
i can definitely relate to writing for seemingly no reason-- great emotion and spark of tone when directing it to "her..." i bet this is a kind of poem people can find themselves in... read some of mine?
liljrp said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 8:22 am
That was kinda deep, but that was good though. 
kdancer454 said...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 9:12 pm
This is really sweet and deep, great job. I couldn't have said it better myself.:)
WritingLoverForever said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 2:14 pm
Oh my word, this is beautiful! So amazing, and sad too. I can totally relate to this. It's always hard to lose love. Great job, and could you check out some of my work maybe? Thanks, and keep writing! :)
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:20 pm
This is so amazing!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
Collin13 replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 10:15 am
thanks for the feedback everyone!!
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