Do I miss it?

July 6, 2010
By Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go big or go home


So now i miss the love

but i dont miss the pain

i miss being by her side

but not taking the blame


I miss staying up dreaming

but i dont miss all the lies

i dont miss the bleeding

and all the tears i cried


So now its summer

and she's out of sight

I dont care about her

yet here i write


Am i writing cause im mad?

am i writing vause im sad?

or is it cause the truth is,

she's the best I've ever had


I miss falling in love

but dont miss the fears

I miss holding you in my arms

But definitly not the tears


Now this is the the end Emily

No matter what you do

I'm gone forever,

Does that sounds familiar to you...?


The author's comments:
Please comment everyone!:)

I dont have much to say....so please comment! thanks!

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Ambs,T said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 10:06 pm
Ambs,T, Roanoke, Texas
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Act on your impulse, swallow the bottle, cut a little deeper, put the gun to your chest. Ellen Hopkins-Impulse

i don't like that many things but i like this. you sound like a romantic person that's sad and mad about a break-up.you're not the only one.so yeah i like your work.

on Aug. 12 2010 at 1:56 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

that was pretty awesome!! :) i liked it! it was sweet-sounding and it had a strong voice ^^ this would make kool song definitely

on Aug. 10 2010 at 9:59 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

i can definitely relate to writing for seemingly no reason-- great emotion and spark of tone when directing it to "her..." i bet this is a kind of poem people can find themselves in... read some of mine?

on Aug. 10 2010 at 10:15 am
Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go big or go home

thanks for the feedback everyone!!

liljrp said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:22 am
That was kinda deep, but that was good though. 

on Jul. 31 2010 at 9:12 pm
kdancer454 SILVER, Lynbrook, New York
6 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
As the heart speaks, the pencil dulls.

This is really sweet and deep, great job. I couldn't have said it better myself.:)

on Jul. 30 2010 at 2:14 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Oh my word, this is beautiful! So amazing, and sad too. I can totally relate to this. It's always hard to lose love. Great job, and could you check out some of my work maybe? Thanks, and keep writing! :)

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:20 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so amazing!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!


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