unknown yet, this is a rap/song

June 15, 2010
By real_as_can_be101 PLATINUM, Mustang, Oklahoma
real_as_can_be101 PLATINUM, Mustang, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
You can love and hate, but which is more irrate? -unknown

shades on your face hide what you need to see
dazy things put away you need brightening
heard on the radio that you're depressed
just address you're fears let god do the rest
best friends for life it's what you wanted
she was taken now your dreams are haunted
sitting in your room thinking of the past
I can only promise all the bad won't last

the world is falling the world is crumbling
falling through the cracks slowly tumbling
pick it up and hold it together
don't make it be like this forever

verse 2: 
cold sweat when you sleep
you're runnin and there's blood on your feet
can you talk no your voice is gone
cry out no one would hear this is wrong
in this alone you need a friend
you won't take me in to lend a hand
can I be your doctor and just help out
cuz the closer I get the more I doubt
are you worth the trouble you cause me
you're the one fallin can't you see
if you'd let me I'd catch you 
help you see what is really true 
since what's happened has happened 
you been left here staggerin
I help balance you out
just beleive and no doubt
one word is all I need
for you to stop and put away the weed
what kept y'all strong when your daddy left? 
what got her goin to do her best?
I'm not gonna lie the truths can hide 
run away and take your pride
but I'll stay here and only wait
I can't make you do anything when your in that state
love is the word if i can remember
that's what held y'all together through thin and thinner
Jack be numb Jack was to quick
you're runnin back I knew my words would stick

the world is falling the world is crumbling
falling through the cracks slowly tumbling
pick it up and hold it together
don't make it be like this forever

verse 3:
I hold your hand walk through the steps
pace yourself and don't forget
youre special they call you a survivor
you were fallin cuz they couldn't revive her
you remember all the good both of u had
I know you got frustrated I know you got mad
you'll see her in your past life she ain't gone
don't forget who she was you called her mom 

the world was falling the world was crumbling
falling through the cracks slowly tumbling
you picked it up and held it together
you knew it couldnt be like this forever

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This article has 8 comments.

on Apr. 30 2017 at 11:19 pm
This was AMAZING! Whoever wrote this needs to record!! Love it! Keep it up!

on Dec. 8 2015 at 3:11 pm
Sayedzai BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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you better then EminEm

Thakar_ said...
on Oct. 5 2015 at 7:47 pm
Wow! This poem is just fantastic!!!! Great structure, brief and articulate, it just pulls you in!!! Great piece of poetry!

on Sep. 14 2015 at 3:14 pm
I was in care my whole life

on Apr. 18 2015 at 12:10 pm
Hey bro can I use this rap I'm a rapper and i woukd love to use this rap.

bear said...
on Feb. 2 2015 at 12:02 pm
You a rapper I like to do some rap with you some time

yellowgirl96 said...
on Jan. 25 2015 at 4:37 pm
Hey can I have this rap Im a rapper and I would really like to have the rights to this rap please

spliff said...
on Jan. 18 2014 at 8:06 am
year is tomorrow fear is a child sorrow danger of the wild   pliz help  

tina.ocasio said...
on Feb. 21 2013 at 11:50 am
damn this had me tearing up, first off i want to tell you that you have mad skills that really touhed my heart.


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