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A band-aid won't fix a broken arm
Like a poem won't fix mistakes
Libby, if you leave me now
More than my heart will break





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Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 10:09 pm
I once wrote a poem about band aids in a metaphorical referrence, yours however, flows better!
 
Collin13 replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 12:08 pm
thanks! and i just realized something..its supposed to be "more than my arm will break" in the last line, ughhhh!!! well thanks though
 
Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 5:32 pm
oh, I think that "heart" works suprisingly well
 
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