Broken

June 30, 2010
By Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Go big or go home


A band-aid won't fix a broken arm
Like a poem won't fix mistakes
Libby, if you leave me now
More than my heart will break



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on Aug. 11 2010 at 5:32 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

oh, I think that "heart" works suprisingly well

on Aug. 11 2010 at 12:08 pm
Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go big or go home

thanks! and i just realized something..its supposed to be "more than my arm will break" in the last line, ughhhh!!! well thanks though

on Aug. 10 2010 at 10:09 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

I once wrote a poem about band aids in a metaphorical referrence, yours however, flows better!




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