Rain Shadow (Empty House)

June 19, 2010
By broadwaygirl0661 GOLD, Solon, Ohio
broadwaygirl0661 GOLD, Solon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Well behaved women NEVER make history."


Empty house, sitting in the rain
too broken to feel anymore pain.
Empty house, sitting in the storm
never seeing past the eyes that were torn.

Ashes will fall when the wind stops blowing
skies will turn gray when it starts snowing.
Rain will never wash away the miser of your mistakes,
shadows can't hide where the darkness is fake.

Empty house in eternal sleep,
closing it's eyes for a world of the deep.
Empty house, never hidden from shame,
never had the chance to be washed away from the rain.

Halos will burn when the light finds the right track,
winter wil cease when death turns back.
Rain will never wash away the guardian of your death,
shadows will be there for your last breath.

Empty house, resting in the night,
memories drowning in an imaginary light.
Empty house, trapped in a world of hate
forgotten by the spring, always too late.



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on Jul. 17 2010 at 11:43 am
broadwaygirl0661 GOLD, Solon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Well behaved women NEVER make history."

Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback!

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 10:04 am
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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I must say I truely like this poem. It's deep and you put it together very thoughtfully, keep up the good job and if you get a chance check me out :)

valmarie14 said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 8:34 pm
this is awesome your really good :)

on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:02 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!




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