Going,going......

May 24, 2010
Woke up this morning and fixed my eggs
trying to shake off mt sleepy haze
the tv was on, I heard doomsayers shout
I pulled up my pants and then I stepped out

At work today I decided to quit
I got sick of my boss and his same old bit
I thought as I cleaned out my desk, what the hey
I lit up a match and I threw it away

at home Fredie mailman came to see me
I invited him in for some biscuts in tea
he drank a little and was out like a light
I hope he enjoys this perminent night

as you sit and read theese words
I admire my work, strung up for the birds
Fred's eyes are gone, only sockets remain
and now he's living in a world without any pain





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 6:19 pm
I love this captain. i love the randomness. and the crazy. this is really neat. 5 stars captain. do your dance.
 
towerjunkie019 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 11:02 pm
Ah,uh,wah,uh,  thanks! I appriciatie it! *wow*
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 12:48 am
......did uh i wah uh miss uh .......-something?
 
towerjunkie019 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 6:42 pm

i didnt think it was very good and am surprised that anyone likes it.  thats all.

 

 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 9:38 pm
i thought the quote was really good.....
 
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