No idea yet :-)

June 5, 2010
By sweetpea114305 SILVER, Bozeman, Montana
sweetpea114305 SILVER, Bozeman, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
“Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.”
-Dr.Seuss


Raindrops fallin round me,
lightning strikes,
thunder rumbles up in the sky.
But with your arms wrapped around me tight, I know everything will be alright.

I see your eyes and
I see your smile,
And I keep noticing your style.
A love like this some say is too good to be true,
But I guess they don't know you like I do.


The author's comments:
just the beginning. Revision of the other one by me called ?????. Please leave feedback. Good or bad!

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on Jul. 8 2010 at 8:30 am
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Why does everyone think I need a man? Look if you find a guy who is decent, good with kids and has respect for women, call me." "It is better to have loved, than to have never loved at all."

this is so pretty! keep on writing!




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