Not a Disney Princess

May 27, 2010
By tactical_wolves BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
tactical_wolves BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Remember, if the world did not suck, we would all fall off."


I'm not prim and proper,
I'm not neat and tidy,
I'm not a work-a-holic
with an evil family.

I'm not very kind and gentle,
like a lady needs to be,
I'm not like all those fairy tales,
I am only me.

I like to play dirty,
I like to show I'm tough,
I like to make people crings
at all that creepy stuff.

They way I speak is very strange,
My voice is raspy and not clean,
I depend only on myself,
on no one else I lean.

I don't believe in true love,
It makes me very sick,
I'm not a lovesick puppy,
nor a plain unloving chick.

Of course love is possible,
Not true love tho I say,
It all is very fake,
It is a great facade.

People dream of princesses,
so nice and very proper,
Those kind and caring people,
who don't get chased by coppers.

They always find true love,
no matter who it is with,
They always get the praise,
For me it's only a myth.

Can't you tell about our difference,
I am a real person named Jess,
I am not a programmed drone,
I am not a Disney Princess


The author's comments:
It's just a little thing I wrote for the fun of it, it still needs some editing.. but otherwise i guess it is ok... i wish i didnt need to use my name in here but i wouldnt be able to make the ending rhyme without it :P if u have any suggestions i would love to hear them... thnx!

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on Jul. 8 2010 at 11:23 am
tactical_wolves BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Remember, if the world did not suck, we would all fall off."

Thank you!

on Jul. 8 2010 at 11:19 am
tactical_wolves BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Remember, if the world did not suck, we would all fall off."

sure :) i will check out urs

on Jul. 8 2010 at 11:19 am
tactical_wolves BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Remember, if the world did not suck, we would all fall off."

thanks, and sure i'll check it out

on Jul. 8 2010 at 8:15 am
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Why does everyone think I need a man? Look if you find a guy who is decent, good with kids and has respect for women, call me." "It is better to have loved, than to have never loved at all."

i agree. i also like the concept and you worded the song very nicely. definetly keep writing.

on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:47 am
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Dreaming is what makes the world go round"

can you comment some of my stuff! i would greatly appreciate it. thanks =)

on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:46 am
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Dreaming is what makes the world go round"

i really liked this! i loved the ending and the whole idea of comparing a real person to a fairy tale princess. good job. keep writing =) 

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2010 at 10:27 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

don't worry, its good and i agree with the poem. A thing so many girls will relate too and i like the ending, no one will care about your name in it. My only suggestion: if you want this to be a song you might want to add a chours.

btw-can you check out some of my stuff?



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