Heart and Love

By , Templeton, PA
My heart jumps,
His falls,
I walk,
He stays.

Not much different from yesterday.

I laugh,
He groans,
I run,
He roams.

Not much I can say.

Cuz he's the boy,
And I'm the girl,
Not much love,
Left in this world.

And if it comes I will go.

First thing first,
Last thing last,
No more sand,
In the hourglass.

Not up to that.

My times up,
Your times in,
Livin life,
Your back again.

Now its time for me to go.
I wish I could be with you.
But not no more,
I'm melting through the floor.

And I'm not yours any more.





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Carolyn Jo S. said...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 10:28 pm
This is really good. It reminds me of my ex though
 
jayjay2015 replied...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 9:31 am
sorry.  but thx for the enthusiasm.
 
Carolyn Jo S. replied...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 11:56 am
Its fine... but it is really good, I showed it to my mom and she really liked it too :)
 
jayjay2015 replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 3:26 pm
thats awsome!!!
 
SamanthaC This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 4:31 pm
i love it! its got a great rhythm and i really liked the lines   "first thing first/ last thing last/ no more sand/ in the hourglass" nice job!
 
jayjay2015 replied...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 9:31 am
i like that stanza too.  thx
 
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