If I Could Visit Heaven For a Night, You're One of The People I'd Visit

May 8, 2010
By theintrovertmonologues DIAMOND, Pittsford, New York
theintrovertmonologues DIAMOND, Pittsford, New York
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I miss your face, I miss your eyes
I miss your smile, it was so nice
But most of all it's you I miss
If only I had taken that last kiss
Why'd you have to go like this?

Tonight I'm wishing on a star
That you'd come back from where you are
And yes I know there is no car
That can take you from there to here
But please I need you to try my dear

Oh how I wish you were here
Remember how i used to whisper in your ear?
And you would laugh and smile
If only for a while
But it made me feel like I could run ten miles
I'd run ten thousand if I knew
That it would take me back to you

Tonight i wanna run to Heaven
I'll take my shoes and start at seven
I'll jump on stars and through a storm
Because i don't want to have to mourn
You anymore
Because everything in me down to my core
Screams out for you
Why is this universe so cruel?

The author's comments:
I wrote this for those who may be able to relate to this pain in some way or another.

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This article has 3 comments.

on May. 30 2010 at 10:09 pm
theintrovertmonologues DIAMOND, Pittsford, New York
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Thank You :)

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on May. 30 2010 at 8:30 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

This is really good. I have a story called the guardian that's sorta like this. Good job!

on May. 28 2010 at 9:39 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

very nice.


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