Curious Feeling

April 26, 2010
By CreativeScript PLATINUM, Port Hardy, Other
CreativeScript PLATINUM, Port Hardy, Other
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Take a breath,
Take a bow,
Let it flow of your lips,
Its the death,
Full of wow,
Peace be bolting like whips,

Im awake, only cause your asleep,
Be alone, just cause your all of me,
Live it up, cause this all the week,
Our love, will last, forever you and me.

The author's comments:
Made up on the spot. My inspiration was the band Owl City, I love his lyrics. He`s a true poet.

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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 9:08 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I love this poem... dang, now I want to check out Owl City, lol :) Good work!

Check out my stuff if you have a chance?

on Jul. 12 2011 at 5:34 pm
Artist_of_the_Quill BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Art is like a flower it opens at its own free will.

I loved your poem. Great job!!!


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