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The day I saw u with her
Was the day I knew u weren’t mine
That was the last time I talked to
And the last u crossed my mind
Until the night u walked up to me
and said Will u dance me
It won’t me a thing
She ain’t here And you are
SO will u dance with me
pretty pretty please
Now when u see me in the hall
U look at me and smile
When ur talking to her
U still look straight at me
And it all happened when u said
Will you dance with me
It won’t mean a thing
She ain’t here and you are
So will u dance with me
Pretty pretty Please
Just dance with me



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radio_song said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 1:26 pm:
yeah, this sounds like a really kool start- i really like it :) its interesting
 
Kay-Kay96 replied...
Apr. 8, 2011 at 4:12 pm :
thanks if only i could finish it
 
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Ventus said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 8:47 pm:
Wow this is beautiful
 
Kay-Kay96 replied...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 9:24 pm :
Thanks alot i didn't think it was good
 
Ventus replied...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 9:30 pm :
i thinks its good.  I think its better than anything i could ever write
 
Kay-Kay96 replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 7:16 pm :
I bet u could rite way better than me
 
Ventus replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 9:31 pm :
 Not really
 
Kay-Kay96 replied...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 11:56 am :
i doubt it
 
Ventus replied...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 6:49 pm :
why? your writing is amazing
 
Kay-Kay96 replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 12:19 pm :
no its not urs is way better
 
Ventus replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 12:48 pm :
Not even. yours is way better
 
Kay-Kay96 replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 8:41 pm :
Most of my friends say i should keep writeing and singing but i dont agree by the way my name is Kaitlyn
 
Ventus replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 8:53 pm :
I like that name its pretty. But you should keep writing kaitlyn your writing is awesome. :D keep writing pleaseeee. My name is Lawrence
 
Kay-Kay96 replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 5:03 pm :
i will keep wirteing if u help me finish this piece
 
Ventus replied...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 6:54 pm :
Ok i"ll help you.
 
Kay-Kay96 replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 3:14 pm :
thanks cause i cant think of anything
 
Ventus replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 5:41 pm :
your welcome but how do i help you?
 
Kay-Kay96 replied...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 5:40 pm :
idk but i dont know how to finish it i have tried a lot of things
 
Ventus replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 9:11 pm :
Ok well sorry thought i replied. If you need anyhelp just send me a text messsage at 6303350532
 
Kay-Kay96 replied...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 2:16 am :
thanks alot
 
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