Bleeding but not broken

April 25, 2010
By LittleMonster13 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
LittleMonster13 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
If something happened in the past...turn the page and move on....


When I needed you
You were never there
I cryed for you
I bled for you
You didn't even care

Why did you do that to me?
Now I'm scared
Scared just to be happy
I've tryed to move on
Tryed to remember that you're gone
I want to let go
But something is telling me "no"

After all you have done to me
All the pain, anger, and sadness
I still can't find it in me to hate you
No matter what you have done or will do
I just can't hate you...

Though my wounds have healed
The scars say it all
Everything you did caused me to fall

I may have fallen...
Bleeding but not broken...
Love is all I need now
To get me through some how...

You don't know my pain
Everyday it drives me insane
The chaos and hell you caused me
Is the same old story

In my darkest time
Where were you?
You were the one I couldn't find
I don't know why
You said I love you
I knew as a fact
It wasn't true

Though my wounds have healed
The scars say it all
Everything you did caused me to fall

I may have fallen...
Bleeding but not broken...
Love is all I need now
To get me through some how...

As I am falling
Reaching for your hand
Will you bring me up?
Or just let me fall again...

I already know what your answer will be
You will pay no attention and just forget me...

I may have fallen...
Bleeding but not broken...
Love is all I need now
To get me through some how...
Bleeding but not broken...

Not broken...


The author's comments:
Life is tough at times and having my heart broken inspired me to write this.
I hope anybody who reads this can relate it to any pain they have received.

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on Oct. 4 2010 at 2:20 pm
skatergirl13 PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
" your heart is the most valuable thing I have I don't want to lose it"

wow bring back alot of bad memories eww

qekelly1 GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2010 at 7:44 am
qekelly1 GOLD, Wayne, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
if you do what uve always done, you'll always get what youve always gotten

I LOVE IT!! it makes sooo much sense to me, really goood

on Jun. 8 2010 at 12:56 pm
blackrose326 GOLD, Burlington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
If who I am is what I have and what I have is lost then who am I? Anonymous
Beauty can not be found in worldy views for these are; corrupted veiws straight form the gates of hell - Anonymous

I love it!!!

Im sitting in the middle of class with tears streaming down my face cause I know exactly what its like to feel that way.

You did a great job a def fav

=)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))


on Jun. 4 2010 at 3:47 pm
deamonswarrior24 BRONZE, Chocolate City, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"If i had to choose between being right and protecting you I'd be wrong every time"

u finaly guessed something right lol

on Jun. 4 2010 at 3:09 pm
skatergirl13 PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Virginia
21 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
" your heart is the most valuable thing I have I don't want to lose it"

yepp that exactly who it is lol

on Jun. 4 2010 at 5:11 am
LittleMonster13 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
If something happened in the past...turn the page and move on....

Hmm....let me guess Tori?

on Jun. 1 2010 at 5:45 pm
deamonswarrior24 BRONZE, Chocolate City, Virginia
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If i had to choose between being right and protecting you I'd be wrong every time"

damn elena this is realy realy good  and im gonna laugh when u cant figure out who this is cause your a bad guesser

on May. 24 2010 at 5:34 pm
Pri-skillet95 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
2 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Truth is, everybody is going to hurt you; you just gotta find the ones worth suffering for." -Bob Marley.

"You have enemies? Good, that means you stood up for something." - Eminem.

:P hahaha whats up?

on May. 24 2010 at 4:44 pm
skatergirl13 PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Virginia
21 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
" your heart is the most valuable thing I have I don't want to lose it"

or who broke your heart just woundering

on May. 24 2010 at 4:44 pm
skatergirl13 PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Virginia
21 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
" your heart is the most valuable thing I have I don't want to lose it"

No prob you know your my girl and just want to know who was the one that hurt you when you wrote this

on May. 23 2010 at 9:31 am
LittleMonster13 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
If something happened in the past...turn the page and move on....

Hey priscilla!!!! xD

on May. 23 2010 at 9:30 am
LittleMonster13 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
If something happened in the past...turn the page and move on....

I know exactly who  u r...thanks for the comments

Sunset said...
on May. 19 2010 at 9:24 am
Love it! thats a pretty damn good song u wrote. keep writing your heart out. stay alive

on May. 18 2010 at 6:57 pm
Pri-skillet95 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
2 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Truth is, everybody is going to hurt you; you just gotta find the ones worth suffering for." -Bob Marley.

"You have enemies? Good, that means you stood up for something." - Eminem.

Elena!! <3 you! guess who this is! haha

on May. 18 2010 at 5:48 pm
skatergirl13 PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Virginia
21 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
" your heart is the most valuable thing I have I don't want to lose it"

this is really good i love it and im srry dat wat happen to yuu trust me i know how yuu feel....i think yuu know who i am

meggers SILVER said...
on May. 17 2010 at 9:14 am
meggers SILVER, San Angelo, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
if u cant say something nice then dont say anything at all

dude i would totally sing this for u my band and i love it!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the good work

Chosen One said...
on May. 17 2010 at 7:46 am
i reallee likee this it is amazing . it is relating to what i am going through . keep up the good work

on May. 15 2010 at 11:23 pm
soccerismylife BRONZE, Norman, Oklahoma
1 article 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"praise does nothing for improvement -- only egos"

i really, really love your lyrics! this is so easy for me to relate to, its kinda sad, but also motivational with "i may have fallen... bleeding but not broken... love is all i need now to get me through somehow..."

on May. 15 2010 at 6:32 pm
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

i really like this song i can relate to its felling and loved how it was put together!!! will def. look up more of your work!!!!

on May. 15 2010 at 6:31 pm
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

talk about it as much as u can and dont let him get away


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