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I’ll Be Okay MAG

April 16, 2010
By lesliej94 BRONZE, Harrisonville, Missouri
lesliej94 BRONZE, Harrisonville, Missouri
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass..it's about learning to dance in the rain"...
"Your 20's are for you to have fun, your 30's are for you to learn the lesson's and your 40's is for you to pay for the drinks"~Sex and the City


Verse 1:
I just wanna cry,
I just wanna hold you tightly never letting you go,
But if there's some extraordinary measure, then I'll never lose control
Chorus:
Cuz all I want is for you to be happy and I'll never get in the way
So just say baby, “I'll be okay…”

Verse 2:
It started as a freshman, on the very first day
I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw you walking my way. (Hmm, hmm)
I didn't know what to do, what if you
said “hey”?
But you kept on walking
And it continued that way.

Chorus
Bridge:
You made me smile, you made me blush
You put my head into a rush
You looked at me and I couldn't breathe, what kind of spell did you put on me?
I don't know, but what I do … is that I'm crazy … crazy for you

Chorus:
But all I want is for you to be happy, and I'll, I'll never get in the way
But all I want is for you to be happy, and I'll never get in the way
So just say baby, ‘I'll be okay''
So just say baby, “I'll be okay''
Baby I know you'll be okay


The author's comments:
This is about a senior I have fell for and he really doesn't know me, and I submitted it into a Poetry Contest..I hope it wins, and it's GOOD!

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on Mar. 25 2014 at 10:24 am
brooklyn0003 SILVER, Summerville, South Carolina
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This is very good  

on Jun. 30 2012 at 5:24 pm
16russos SILVER, Wayne, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Each time you love, love as if it were forever."

That's good! It's totally relatable and I personally don't think the lyrics are cliche, but actually flow nicely throughout the song.

on Jun. 5 2012 at 10:15 am
RandomPoet SILVER, Apopka, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates you never know what your gonna get"Forrest Gump
"Never say goodbye, because goodbye means going away and going away means for getting"Peterpan

I have to say i got really into it, I really felt like i was there seeing him the guy i liked and wanted him to notice me so bad. I been there before a couple of times and this is one of the first one i read where i can relate to the situation. Keep on writing ok!

on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:32 pm
GreaterUnknown BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 2 comments
These lyrics are okay, but at the same time a bit corny. Try not to use cliches, it will help your song sound more original.

RTB5574 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 11:31 am
RTB5574 BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"who's God"

this song is pretty legit and i like it, you did very good

on Jul. 3 2011 at 1:07 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

This is great. It brings back memories of my freshman year when I fell hard for a senior who turned out to like me back. Could you maybe check out one of my songs, like "The You I Thought I Knew" or "Fading Memory"? And I hope you win the poetry contest; you deserve it! :)

selenafan#1 said...
on Feb. 1 2011 at 4:33 am
wow this is really good someone special u hav ur eyes 4? well if he sees talent he'll fall for ya grl!!!!!! ur really skilled i'll be lookin for ur songs out on playlist!

on May. 17 2010 at 1:28 pm
lesliej94 BRONZE, Harrisonville, Missouri
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass..it's about learning to dance in the rain"...
"Your 20's are for you to have fun, your 30's are for you to learn the lesson's and your 40's is for you to pay for the drinks"~Sex and the City

Thanks...it's about someone special who is going off to college...so a senior:))))

on May. 17 2010 at 10:45 am
.Escape.From.This.Afterlife. GOLD, Short Hills, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"bad blood is more satisfying to spill across the floor..."

This is really good, I can almost hear the tune when reading it.  Excellent Job!