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Falling like Alice
Wonderland in bliss
White rabbit's too fast
Caught in a trance
Will you dance?
Will you dance?
Feet tangled
Golden thread strangles
Heart's too heavy
Night's so dreary
What's the use of a slow song
If the hand I was holding
Isn't yours?
I close my eyes
Enter a land of dreamland fairy tales
Of castles and fairies
People with kaleidoscope scales
Masquerade's a mystery
Knowing that you're here with me
Like a maze
I'm lost in a daze
The girl with her heart thrown and broken
Too used and was darkened
In a shade of red
Like a boulevard of a thousand sunsets
I take a hand
With a hopeful wish
My eyes are closed, but I feel the warmth
Hands in a tight band
I open my eyes, and I feel the whispers
Of that dreamland fairytale
Light, fading and frail
Taking me back on a sail
On that boulevard with a thousand sunsets
A smile under the mask, I bet
Is my dreamland fairytale's
Magical talent

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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teen-writer said...
May 7 at 2:56 pm:
DUDE!! this is SO good!!keep writing
 
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thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 9:55 pm:
wow!!! you got in the magazine?!!! total jealousy right here, totally! lol :D I loved the description all the way through this and even in some parts when i didn't understand, it was still completely beautiful. I love the line that says, people with kaleidoscope scales. just the sound of those words together sounds so beautiful! I kind of don't understand the last couple of lines though. i really wish i did!!! Nevertheless, the whole way through my eyes were glued to the page! Would you m... (more »)
 
stxroo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 17, 2011 at 10:52 am :
Hi! :) Thank you so much! Sure, I'll read yours too.
 
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OriginalCarbonation said...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 4:33 pm:
i my goodness this is so incredibly well written and sooo meaningful and relatable. the phrasing is so unique but not seems so completly natural. i absolutly love this. i favorite it :)
 
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Wolfie16 said...
Dec. 29, 2010 at 9:10 pm:
this is fabulous!
 
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timeformetofly7 said...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 5:40 pm:
oh my goodness, i totally loved reading this!!! it was very beautifully worded. you are so very talented ^^ AwEsOmE job!!
 
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Duckie430This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 9, 2010 at 12:44 pm:
i like this!
 
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Flora said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 3:32 pm:

Wonderful!!!

Keep writing, it's awesome

 
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LadyMoon said...
Nov. 3, 2010 at 11:59 am:
Love it! Really nice and sweet. Love that metaphorical twist. Keep writing, you have real talent!
 
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