Alone with Ol' Sister

April 20, 2010
By ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-


My, my,
Oh sugar pie.
We're all alone,
No mother, no clone.

In the house,
Sounds of a mouse,
Scare us to death,
It holds our breathe.
It takes our courage,
It takes feeling,
Fear from the ground to the ceiling.

With lights on,
We say goodnight,
But it's hard to sleep,
'Cause it's too bright.

Where have they gone?
Tell me, my sister,
Before the dawn.
Before we cry.
I'm just a fawn,
I'm just a baby,
Sprawled on the lawn,
Are hopes and dreams.

My, my,
Oh sugar pie,
We're all alone,
No mother, no clone.

Where have they gone?
And do they notice?
That we're still here,
That we're still here.

Younger sister,
Don't suck your thumb,
I'll hold you,
Until they come,
Until they rescue,
Our young souls,
Count to three,
And it'll all be gone.

Innocence,
And a quiet dream,
A sacred wish,
And our favorite dish,
I promise you,
That's when they'll come.
To make up,
For where they crawled from.

Where have they gone?
Tell me, my sister,
Before the dawn,
Before we cry.
I'm just a fawn,
I'm just a baby,
Sprawled on the lawn,
Are Mom and Dad.

Lifeless as the sea,
Before the storm,
Only you and me to mourn.



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on Dec. 24 2010 at 1:46 am
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

I just re-read this and realized how idiotic I sounded, kirbybug. Haha.

on Jul. 10 2010 at 7:55 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

thank you.

on Jul. 10 2010 at 3:45 pm
homewardbound, Billerica, Massachusetts
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I loved this Elijah. I'm going to make teenink tell me when you put up more stuff. It's wonderful.

on May. 20 2010 at 3:22 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

oh. haha no, i really appreciate what you're doing, you have no idea. i would love for you to comment on everything i do, it helps. i will do the same for you whenever I have time, i'm not selfish haha.

kirbybug said...
on May. 20 2010 at 2:41 pm
no its  not bad i just didnt want you to think i was stalking you or somethin

on May. 20 2010 at 2:17 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

is it bad to?

on May. 13 2010 at 2:50 pm
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

you said that your heros were your family or parnets caint member and god so i guessed ou were a christian of some sort!! and i just didnt want u to think iwas stalking u or somethin!!!!lol;)

on May. 13 2010 at 2:01 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

thank you so much, but what do you mean by another believer? and why did you say "admit"? i find it flattering you looked up my profile. is it bad to look me up?

on May. 12 2010 at 7:46 pm
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

kinda mad me sad though!!!halol i wish i could write this good!!!!;0

on May. 12 2010 at 7:45 pm
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

wow totally awesome!!!

i must admit i looked up your profile and am glad 2 see a nother beleiver!!!


on May. 12 2010 at 10:56 am
angellovesyou BRONZE, Ruskin, Florida
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keep on going, never give up.

:***( that was sooo sad but good


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