This Last Note

April 7, 2010
By JordanTaylaa GOLD, Stephens City, Virginia
JordanTaylaa GOLD, Stephens City, Virginia
12 articles 13 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Before you, my life was like a moonless night. very dark. but there were stars-- points of light and reason. and then you shot across my sky like a meteor. suddenly everything was on fire. there was brilliancy, there was beauty. when you were gone, the meteor had fallen over the horizon. everything went black. nothing had changed. but my eyes were blinded by the light. I couldn't see stars anymore."


V1:
baby, i want change
im thinkin its time
to move on and leave
everything we have behind
i cant stay here forever
i have to live my life
its not easy just to leave without a warning or a sign.

C:
set me free
youve gotta let me go
i wanna go see
what all this world has to show
i hope you know i love you
but im gonna hit the road
so im leaving you
with our memories and this last note.

V2:
this is the hardest thing ive ever done
but it made it easier
to live this and run
im avoiding all the tears
we both would shed
but ill live my life
with your picture in my head

C:
set me free
youve gotta let me go
i wanna go see
what all this world has to show
i hope you know i love you
but im gonna hit the road
so im leaving you
with our memories and this last note.

V3:
i promise you
i will never forget
everything we shared
i already regret
what im doing to us
i wish itd go away
but i think that we mist
we must move on
get away from the past
i need to live it up
though what we have could last

B:
youre like a drug
its hard to get away
but its time for me to go
break out of these chains
that keep holding me back
from the rest of the world
so you have to say goodbye
and let go of this girl
ill miss you
but its going to end
just think all we could be
when our broken hearts mend

C:
set me free
youve gotta let me go
i wanna go see
what all this world has to show
i hope you know i love you
but im gonna hit the road
so im leaving you
with our memories and this last note.


The author's comments:
I wrote random lines, and I wanted to use them. This is just what came out. It's a letter/note a girl is leaving for her boyfriend telling her she's going away to explore the world. She loves him and whats to stay but its holding her back from her life.

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on May. 12 2010 at 9:48 pm
JordanTaylaa GOLD, Stephens City, Virginia
12 articles 13 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Before you, my life was like a moonless night. very dark. but there were stars-- points of light and reason. and then you shot across my sky like a meteor. suddenly everything was on fire. there was brilliancy, there was beauty. when you were gone, the meteor had fallen over the horizon. everything went black. nothing had changed. but my eyes were blinded by the light. I couldn't see stars anymore."

Oh really?! That's such a shame. It's not a fun situation. That never happened to me, I mean I wouldn't leave someone with a letter. But, what do you think you're going to do?

on May. 4 2010 at 11:27 am
ayedeezyf.baby BRONZE, Fredericksburg, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
you just do you, & i'm do me

soo inspirational right now i feel the samee way about someonee. wanting to movee on but it's hardd too.


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