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My Suffering

April 6, 2010
By FINALDARKNESS12 GOLD, Appleton, Wisconsin
FINALDARKNESS12 GOLD, Appleton, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I've told you before. You shouldn't judge people based on appearances and your preconceptions."
"When the rich wage war its the poor that die"


I hear the voices in my head
Oh god make it go away
I can’t live with this
I need my peace but I can’t have it
This is my problem
I need to do this myself
Get away I don’t want to hurt you
I can’t trust anyone anymore
After what so mine people but me though
Should I believe you?
More importantly why should I trust you?
Why are you helping me?
I need to do this by my self
None of this involves you
My problem
My life
My obsession
Everyone get away I don’t want to hurt you
You can’t save me an more
You should of help right away
I don’t know who to trust
Are you lying to me again?
Or are you telling the truth?
Get away
There is no more time
Get away
Or you will get hurt
Get away
Why do you want to help me?
You can’t change what doesn’t want to change
You don’t have to like me and my ways
I like the way I live
I’m fine off without help
I can do a lot more then you
You can’t change me
You will get hurt
I know now you can’t be trusted
There is no one I can trust
You have lost all my respect
You’re a disgrace
I can’t even look at you

The author's comments:
this is the one that i feel that is more me

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on May. 4 2010 at 11:34 am
rachueltritt4, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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i mean song (:

 


on May. 4 2010 at 11:33 am
rachueltritt4, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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really great poem <3

on May. 2 2010 at 3:51 pm
maybesomeday101 BRONZE, Gallipolis, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"If we begin to discover a feeling in our hearts that nothing in this world can satisfy, we should begin to wonder if perhaps we were created for another world" -C.S Lewis

wow...this is really good. kinda like something you are afraid to read for to long becasue of all the pain and hurt. you're brave to allow these emotions to come out. loved it...hope things get better tho, i know from experience what it's like to not want help....ne ways, keep writing :)

Bethani GOLD said...
on May. 1 2010 at 5:46 pm
Bethani GOLD, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Life is perfect until you sit back and realize how boring it is without risks.

This is a great song!