Empty

March 20, 2010
By Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
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Like an empty shell
My life feels like hell.
No one loves me…
Anymore,
All alone.
You cant tell,
Anyone.
Every one.
All these people and still,
Im alone.
Your on the phone.


If you were to end your life…
Id never stop blaming myself.
And it hurts..
I can't breath…
The stuff going on in my life…
Its not like aburden on my shoulders…
Its on my chest

And I know it hurts…
We just have to deal a lil' longer…
When the groups break up…
And then we will be…
On safe grounds…


So hold…
Hold on a lil longer…


The author's comments:
i wrote this after my bestie made me cry! gosh isn't she inspiring?

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Sania GOLD said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 4:32 pm
Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 14 comments
Thank you all I was really hurt at the moment, Im happy that all of you liked it. I mean at least I hurt and it had a good outcome. :)

on May. 20 2010 at 3:26 pm
Alvar-Knight SILVER, Harlingen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
what is said flies,
what is written never dies.

its cool i love it really i mean i work in poems and my friends say its dark, sad, or that i'm holding feelings. but in reality i write them out of no were. YOUR POEM IS WIKED!

Lynnie said...
on May. 19 2010 at 7:29 pm
Lynnie, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Music is life

this is a really nice piece =]

on May. 19 2010 at 5:20 pm
Sketched97 PLATINUM, Silver Spring, Maryland
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amazing! 

on May. 19 2010 at 4:56 pm
LuckyMar BRONZE, Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"My world would be nothing without words on paper"-------- My own personal quote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I absolutely completely love this poem. I thought I was the only person in the world who work depressing and dark poetry but apparently not........

Your poetry is amazing, I felt it from the title to the middle to the end of thr story. You truely know how to put feelings in words.





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