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Like an empty shell
My life feels like hell.
No one loves me…
Anymore,
All alone.
You cant tell,
Anyone.
Every one.
All these people and still,
Im alone.
Your on the phone.


If you were to end your life…
Id never stop blaming myself.
And it hurts..
I can't breath…
The stuff going on in my life…
Its not like aburden on my shoulders…
Its on my chest

And I know it hurts…
We just have to deal a lil' longer…
When the groups break up…
And then we will be…
On safe grounds…


So hold…
Hold on a lil longer…





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Sania said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 4:32 pm
Thank you all I was really hurt at the moment, Im happy that all of you liked it. I mean at least I hurt and it had a good outcome. :)
 
bloodprincess said...
May 20, 2010 at 3:26 pm
its cool i love it really i mean i work in poems and my friends say its dark, sad, or that i'm holding feelings. but in reality i write them out of no were. YOUR POEM IS WIKED!
 
Lynnie said...
May 19, 2010 at 7:29 pm
this is a really nice piece =]
 
DanceAway This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2010 at 5:20 pm
amazing! 
 
LuckyMar said...
May 19, 2010 at 4:56 pm

I absolutely completely love this poem. I thought I was the only person in the world who work depressing and dark poetry but apparently not........

Your poetry is amazing, I felt it from the title to the middle to the end of thr story. You truely know how to put feelings in words.

 
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