I'll have you

March 26, 2010
By JadedSoul SILVER, Evans, Georgia
JadedSoul SILVER, Evans, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Hey now, look what
You've done to me.
I can't even live
a second without you

This can't be right
I know you can see
What you right here
Have got me into


I live for you now,
You're my life, my love
My everything ..
And I dont know how
To get rid of this damn
Stupid feeling..
What ever I do makes me
Think of you
You may think Im going crazy
Well, I think so too.
Yet I know whatever'll happen
I know that I'll still have you


What's got to me,
Of late I feel different
Is this called love
Coz' I know you ain't just a friend
Everytime we touch,
I can feel the sparks shooting up
I know you do too,
So dont ask me to ' Shut up'!!

Cant you even get it right?



I live for you now,
You're my life, my love
My everything ..
And I dont know how
To get rid of this damn
Stupid feeling..
What ever I do makes me
Think of you
You may think Im going crazy
Well, I think so too.
Yet I know whatever'll happen
I know that I'll still have you


Hey wait!!

Did YOU just wink at me
and say 'hey beautiful'??
Hey, was it you who
stuffed my bag with roses so cool?
Were you the one sending me
those love letters with no name?
That's just so sickening
And totally LAME!!!

Who am I kidding?

I live for you now,
You're my love, my life,
my everything.
And I know now I dont need to
get rid of this super sweet feeling
Cause I know better that
I love you and you love me too
(Im sooo glad cause)
You don't think I'm going crazy,
Hell I agree with you
No matter what'll happen
I know I'll always have you
(And you'll have me too!)

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The author's comments:
This was something I'd written almost an year ago. I thought it was really childish and didn't dare to put it up anywhere. Yesterday while I was searching for some physics book, I found my old journal in my cupboard and decided to put this up.This was probably my first poem. Hope you enjoy it. Do let me know what you liked or din't like. I'll be glad to take up any suggestions. :)

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loka said...
on May. 28 2010 at 3:25 am
whoa..!... dats really nice.....!!!        ...... totally!! i lyked it !!:)

on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:38 pm
JadedSoul SILVER, Evans, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 37 comments
thank you :)

on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:37 pm
JadedSoul SILVER, Evans, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 37 comments
hank you :)... i know i shud try.... I've written one.... Just that I feel too lazy to add in unnecessary pronouns which you can skip in poems

rolly30 said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 5:24 pm
 very cute!its  so fresh., u shd  try litr,,

Mango19 SILVER said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 9:19 am
Mango19 SILVER, Secunderabad, Other
5 articles 2 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If Winter comes , can Spring be far behind ?"
"There are no shortcuts to any place worth going"

cute n free-flowing :)




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