Or I'm Leavin' You today

March 25, 2010
By LikeToPlayFish GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
LikeToPlayFish GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"We all fake smiles, just the ones who are true to themselves seem sad."-Niq.


Verse 1: I know what I hear might not be right
But every time I hear it, it hurts inside
I need you to do me a good deed
It’s just this one thing that I need

Chorus (1): need you to tell me that you need me
That you want me in your life
That I’m the number 1 guy for you
That you’d rather have me than anyone else
Now tell me what you know you gotta say
Or I’m leavin’, Ya I’m leavin’ you today

Verse 2: Now I know That you probably still like me
But it just doesn’t seem that way
There’s only one thing you have to do
If you want me to stay

Chorus : you need to tell me that you need me
That you want me in your life
That I’m the number 1 guy for you
That you’d rather have me than anyone else
Now tell me what you know you gotta say
Or I’m leavin’, Ya I’m leavin’ you today

Verse 3: Now this song it wasn’t very easy to write
Cause really girl I don’t wanna start a fight
But if you want me to stay another day
You know what you gotta say

(chorus)

Girl if you want me stay
Then say what you know you gotta say


The author's comments:
Actual real-life experience
(a serenade)

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on Jun. 3 2010 at 7:07 pm
CanYouSeeTheCrazy PLATINUM, Cle Elum, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I know why everyone in this world is so desperate to find love."
"Oh yeah? Why then?"
"Because, it's the closest thing we have to magic."

wow, i like it a lot. very original word choice, and just overall good job!

on Apr. 16 2010 at 11:39 am
StevieRene SILVER, Magnolia, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone will hurt you, you have to decide who is worth it
- Bob Marley

I like this alot, I could have saved a realationship if I would have told my guy I needed him :) Keep working.

 





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