Deception behind the beauty

March 24, 2010
By Daretobedifferent GOLD, Orlando, Florida
Daretobedifferent GOLD, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Live. Love. Laugh. Give.


This man offers his hand,
Beauty so deceiving and now
Ive fallen in love with who you are

Why did you choose me?
Out of all these people, your
open door looks so inviting...

I found my way back home back into your arms.. and now I'm

Lost for words,
Forgot who I am and now
Im spinning around
Please let go of my hand

Why did you choose me?

Can i find my way back home
back into your arms
And now I'm

Dancing with the devil all around
but I can see you from afar
standing with arms wide open
how did I get so far?

Ive tasted this fruit it was so sweet
with a bitter after taste Ive fallen to my knees
i hear you calling out to me
child come hom
but will you still accept me
Despite my adultry?


He holds out his hand and whispers may I have this dance?

I found my way back home
back into your arms
Where I belong
I am yours and you are mine!

There's no deception behind the beauty of Christ!


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Wrote with a friend!

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on Apr. 29 2011 at 2:27 am
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
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Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)
Writing is an art few people master it. -me

i dont believe in god, but this is beautiful

on Apr. 19 2010 at 3:13 pm
musicavita11 SILVER, Schoolcraft, Michigan
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"Be the change you wish to see in the world" -- Ghandi

I love what you write. You are so good :)

on Apr. 14 2010 at 10:29 pm
Daretobedifferent GOLD, Orlando, Florida
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Live. Love. Laugh. Give.

Haha thanks! Like to leave the audience a little on edge ;)

 

Thanks so much for reading! Means alot!!!


on Apr. 14 2010 at 10:27 pm
Daretobedifferent GOLD, Orlando, Florida
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Live. Love. Laugh. Give.

Thank You so much! Your feedback is always appreciated =)

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on Apr. 13 2010 at 6:46 pm
Bethani GOLD, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
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Life is perfect until you sit back and realize how boring it is without risks.

Stunning! Keep it up!

on Apr. 12 2010 at 5:36 pm
deardiary BRONZE, Saskatoon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It is a truth universally acknowedged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife. -Pride and Prejudice

O wow, I wasn't expecting the ending. Good twist :)


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