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1st verse:
Sitting there watching me
Not really caring 'bout any thing that's going on
Sitting there listening'
Hearing' every word I say
Wish they would just talk to me
Now they are just whispering
Waiting watching whispering
I think I'm gonna scream

Chorus:
Shut up, shut up
I wish they would
Shut up, shut up
I wish they could
They love my pain
Hate it when I am happy
Why am I the one they blame

Second Verse:
Now they are in my head
They are against me
Just like the rest of them
Just waiting
For me to do wrong
Waiting
For me to get hurt
Waiting to STRIKE
Waiting to STRIKE
Chorus:
Shut up, shut up
I wish they would
Shut up, shut up
I wish they could
They love my pain
Hate it when I am happy
Why am I the one they blame (2x)




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sNIKerz said...
May 13, 2010 at 10:49 am:
I like this song. I sung it like four times haha :) Awesome job!
 
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HeronHero said...
May 2, 2010 at 11:39 am:
I agree with Maya, you express your emotions very well in this and I'd love to hear the music too!I like the waiting to strike part, a lot.
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
May 3, 2010 at 6:08 am :
thanks for the comment I don't get very many so the ones that I do get I make sure to say thank you for. If we get the YouTube thing then you can definitly hear the music for it.
 
HeronHero replied...
May 12, 2010 at 1:51 am :
aww you're totally welcome!:) that would be awesome.....also if you could check some of my stuff out too, I'd really appreciate it!:)
 
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MayaElyashiv This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 2, 2010 at 11:00 am:
Very nice, especially for a first song: It's catchy, even with out the tune (which I can't wait to hear!), and your emotions are conveyed extremely well. 
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
May 3, 2010 at 6:07 am :
thanks yeah my first song writing attept was at age 5 so I was still in a gibberish stage and it was not much of a song
 
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jonas_chic899 said...
May 2, 2010 at 9:00 am:
thats awesome!!!!! i could feel the 'rage' in the words!! goooood job!!!!!!!
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
May 2, 2010 at 9:15 am :
yeah this is written about something that I regret doing now but it could also aply to the cheerleader problem that I have they make me so mad most of the time
 
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Mimi8 said...
May 2, 2010 at 8:58 am:
I really like it. It is really good.
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
May 2, 2010 at 9:13 am :
Thanks I sing this all the time now
 
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Venus_Queen said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 9:23 am:
this is good! i loved it! Maggs ya is good!! :}
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 10:08 am :

thanks Krissy

like I had said to you earlier I didn't even realize that it had been put up yet

 
Venus_Queen_42410 replied...
May 8, 2010 at 7:30 pm :
omg i jusr re-read this and now its one of my faves! :}
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
May 13, 2010 at 8:36 am :
awwwwww thanks Krissy. I am singing this for my class today in elluminate
 
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Kay-Kay96 said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 8:16 am:
omg i luved it I HOPE yooh keep riting so i can read more
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 8:00 am :
thanks for the comments sorry I haven't replied to them this is still kittycorn just a different account
 
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his baby said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:13 pm:
omg i loved it so much its great keep on writin them!!!! =)
 
Methods-of-my-Life replied...
May 7, 2010 at 7:06 pm :
I love this Maggs keep writing because you give me inspiration with stuff like this =)
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
May 7, 2010 at 7:13 pm :
thanks bro I am glad that I inspire you like you do me
 
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