shut up

March 18, 2010
By pretty_baby BRONZE, Miamisburg, Ohio
pretty_baby BRONZE, Miamisburg, Ohio
1 article 1 photo 4 comments

1st verse:
Sitting there watching me
Not really caring 'bout any thing that's going on
Sitting there listening'
Hearing' every word I say
Wish they would just talk to me
Now they are just whispering
Waiting watching whispering
I think I'm gonna scream

Chorus:
Shut up, shut up
I wish they would
Shut up, shut up
I wish they could
They love my pain
Hate it when I am happy
Why am I the one they blame

Second Verse:
Now they are in my head
They are against me
Just like the rest of them
Just waiting
For me to do wrong
Waiting
For me to get hurt
Waiting to STRIKE
Waiting to STRIKE
Chorus:
Shut up, shut up
I wish they would
Shut up, shut up
I wish they could
They love my pain
Hate it when I am happy
Why am I the one they blame (2x)


The author's comments:
This is my first song so I would really appreciate the feedback

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sNIKerz said...
on May. 13 2010 at 10:49 am
I like this song. I sung it like four times haha :) Awesome job!

on May. 13 2010 at 8:36 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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awwwwww thanks Krissy. I am singing this for my class today in elluminate

on May. 12 2010 at 1:51 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

aww you're totally welcome!:) that would be awesome.....also if you could check some of my stuff out too, I'd really appreciate it!:)

on May. 8 2010 at 7:30 pm
omg i jusr re-read this and now its one of my faves! :}

on May. 7 2010 at 7:13 pm
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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thanks bro I am glad that I inspire you like you do me

on May. 7 2010 at 7:06 pm
Frog-Prince PLATINUM, Lakeside, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Peace is not the absence of conflict, but the ability to cope with it"

I love this Maggs keep writing because you give me inspiration with stuff like this =)

on May. 3 2010 at 6:08 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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thanks for the comment I don't get very many so the ones that I do get I make sure to say thank you for. If we get the YouTube thing then you can definitly hear the music for it.

on May. 3 2010 at 6:07 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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thanks yeah my first song writing attept was at age 5 so I was still in a gibberish stage and it was not much of a song

on May. 2 2010 at 11:39 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

I agree with Maya, you express your emotions very well in this and I'd love to hear the music too!I like the waiting to strike part, a lot.

on May. 2 2010 at 11:00 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
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Very nice, especially for a first song: It's catchy, even with out the tune (which I can't wait to hear!), and your emotions are conveyed extremely well. 

on May. 2 2010 at 9:15 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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yeah this is written about something that I regret doing now but it could also aply to the cheerleader problem that I have they make me so mad most of the time

on May. 2 2010 at 9:13 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thanks I sing this all the time now

on May. 2 2010 at 9:00 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

thats awesome!!!!! i could feel the 'rage' in the words!! goooood job!!!!!!!

MiriamH said...
on May. 2 2010 at 8:58 am
MiriamH, Mequon, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
“I just want someone to hear what I have to say. And maybe if I talk long enough, it’ll make sense.”

I really like it. It is really good.

on Apr. 21 2010 at 10:08 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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thanks Krissy

like I had said to you earlier I didn't even realize that it had been put up yet


Venus_Queen said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 9:23 am
this is good! i loved it! Maggs ya is good!! :}

on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:00 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 41 comments
thanks for the comments sorry I haven't replied to them this is still kittycorn just a different account

on Apr. 7 2010 at 8:16 am
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

omg i luved it I HOPE yooh keep riting so i can read more

his baby said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:13 pm
omg i loved it so much its great keep on writin them!!!! =)




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