Fading Away

March 19, 2010
By HaleyM BRONZE, Carroll, Iowa
HaleyM BRONZE, Carroll, Iowa
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Fading Away

I watch you fall apart.
Your breathing slows,
Your eyes take stare.
Your heart beats slow,
Your skins turns pale.
I can only hold you.

I feel alive when I`m near you,
But it is all about to change.
I can`t bare to see you like this,
Holding your life for me.
You know I care to deeply to let you go,
But I know you must leave.

Never leave me, I`ll have no one left.
Without you at my side, I will have to see,
That inside, You are always with me.

I will learn to live on my own and enjoy life.
But I will be all alone while you wait for me.
Inside, you know I love you.
But now, I have to let you go.

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This article has 3 comments.

HaleyM BRONZE said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 11:31 pm
HaleyM BRONZE, Carroll, Iowa
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
thanks!! and I will!

on Apr. 4 2010 at 3:23 pm
sharpshot1 GOLD, Del City, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because its over, smile because it happend" -Dr. Suess

That is really good! I gave you 5 stars! :D you should check out my song "Scarlet Sunset" Its a little brighter but I know you will like it


Milo! said...
on Mar. 31 2010 at 9:34 pm
This is really good. It’s easy to relate to, and interesting to read. Keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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