Oh, no please.

March 6, 2010
By Kaye_K SILVER, Janesville, Wisconsin
Kaye_K SILVER, Janesville, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"If you expect perfection in your writing...then you shouldn't become a writer."


You say
“I think it’s bout time,
You get up off
that couch of mine.”

You laugh
and try to be sincere
But those red eyes say
That I am not welcome here.

So I’ll leave
You alone with your ego
Dear, that’s the only love
You’ve ever known.

Oh no please.
I’ll find my own way out.
You never were a gentlemen.
So why start now?
Oh no please.
I can call my own yellow cab.
Put those sad violins to rest.
This goodbye really isn’t all that sad.

You hold my
hand against your heart.
You have to force your speech
saying “this is where you are.”

Oh no please.
Save your weak words.
Don’t you notice
that I’m not hurt?

You say
“I think it’s bout time,
you walk away now.
Get me off your mind.”

I laugh
and remember how we met.
You’re lucky you’ve got that smile.
The rest is easy to forget.



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Kaye_K SILVER said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 10:29 am
Kaye_K SILVER, Janesville, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you expect perfection in your writing...then you shouldn't become a writer."

thank you. I appreciate the compliment lol

on Apr. 2 2010 at 10:40 pm
Denmark DIAMOND, Sacramento, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Our Deepest Fear is not that we are inadequate, our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure"

ur very welcome=) and yay I got =] ur also very prettty. I can make out a beautiful face there.=)

Kaye_K SILVER said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 5:30 pm
Kaye_K SILVER, Janesville, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you expect perfection in your writing...then you shouldn't become a writer."

Yep :) You got it. Thanks for the comment.

on Apr. 1 2010 at 3:04 am
Denmark DIAMOND, Sacramento, California
53 articles 55 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our Deepest Fear is not that we are inadequate, our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure"

very interesting. i have a few hunches about what it could mean but...im not quite sure..i would say that from the beginning begins the story towards the end..perhaps an egotistical guy who didn't realize he had a good thing in his life and decided to self indulge in his own inner revels, the girl finally decides to move on, now all of a sudden the wool is pulled from over his eyes, now she matters.

 

just my interpretation.

 

thanks for the share.=)



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