That Moment

March 12, 2010
By Clopsey PLATINUM, Chapel Hill, North Carolina
Clopsey PLATINUM, Chapel Hill, North Carolina
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It’s that moment
You feel on top of the world
Nothing can bring you down
And everything falls into place
Then you hit the ground

It’s that heartbreak
Coursing through your veins
All this unexpected shame
Trying to look around
Then you hit the ground

You never knew that you were falling
You felt safe upon the shore
You never heard them calling
If they were
It doesn’t matter anymore

That fire
You always felt inside
To keep on moving on
To get up when you fell
Now it seems is gone

The world
Is spinning in your mind
Bruised and bent like dawn
Diamonds turn to dust
Now it seems you’re gone


It’s that tension
Sifting through the fans
Watching you from crowded stands
Knowing inside she's not there
Trying not to care

It’s that anger
You think you shouldn’t feel
Urging it to heal
Hoping that somehow it’s fair
‘Cause you can’t help but care


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This article has 3 comments.

on Mar. 30 2010 at 10:11 am
effortlesslove BRONZE, Westminster, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A friend is someone who can sing the song in your heart when you have forgotten the words"i

Such a good song, it must of taken awhile to write that.

on Mar. 28 2010 at 10:23 pm
Clopsey PLATINUM, Chapel Hill, North Carolina
41 articles 23 photos 28 comments
Thanks. Glad you like it :) I'll take a look!

Milo! said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 8:14 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

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