Rain.

March 12, 2010
By FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
180 articles 8 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
Write what you know, and dream of. - Jane Austen
People throw rocks at things that shine - Taylor Swift
Just Keep Swimming! Just Keep Swimming! - Ellen DeGengeres as Dory


Thunder rumbles in the distance,
the raindrops fall,
Pitter Patter,

Pitter Patter,


Pitter Patter,
as
they
run
down
my
window

pane,

I stare,
at their beauty,
and the life they bring to spring.


The author's comments:
I seriously love the rain, expecially the smell of rain, it's the best smell ever! :)

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on Jul. 1 2010 at 1:42 am
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Silence is golden...duct tape is silver" - a random T-shirt

I like this a lot because although I hate winter I love to see the mist spring of the ground as the rain hits it - like a perfect raindrop splitting into other smaller perfect rain.

Look youve lost me in this wonderful poem :D


on Apr. 30 2010 at 5:12 pm
FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
180 articles 8 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
Write what you know, and dream of. - Jane Austen
People throw rocks at things that shine - Taylor Swift
Just Keep Swimming! Just Keep Swimming! - Ellen DeGengeres as Dory

I will definantly keep writing! I think it's in my blood lol. I love rain, my mom thinks im crazy cause I'll sit at a window and just watch it rain lol!

on Apr. 23 2010 at 11:38 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

I know what you mean about the rain. I love it too. Especially the smell of the asphalt right after a storm...Not only that but rain can be constituted as happy or sad. This is a great peom, i really like it, and i hope you will keep writing!

on Apr. 8 2010 at 6:02 pm
Denmark DIAMOND, Sacramento, California
53 articles 55 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our Deepest Fear is not that we are inadequate, our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure"

yeah its awesome to me too=) well keep posting i like your stuff chica=)

on Apr. 8 2010 at 5:02 pm
FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
180 articles 8 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
Write what you know, and dream of. - Jane Austen
People throw rocks at things that shine - Taylor Swift
Just Keep Swimming! Just Keep Swimming! - Ellen DeGengeres as Dory

lol I post alot, because I write alot, lol, and I think this whole website wherer you can post your work and read other peoples is a really cool idea! So I post almost all I write I have on here lol.

on Apr. 5 2010 at 4:02 pm
Denmark DIAMOND, Sacramento, California
53 articles 55 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our Deepest Fear is not that we are inadequate, our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure"

hmmm i could see what you meant by stiff and nto all flowy wavey but still it was nice=) and ur welcomeeee. you post a lot on the site i see ur name everywhere lol...XD

on Apr. 4 2010 at 8:53 pm
FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
180 articles 8 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
Write what you know, and dream of. - Jane Austen
People throw rocks at things that shine - Taylor Swift
Just Keep Swimming! Just Keep Swimming! - Ellen DeGengeres as Dory

Thanks! I love the rain to, the words didn't come out right, it was supposed to be like an image poem, so the words were not put so stiff lol, like "as they run down my winodw" should of been all wavey and stuff lol. Oh well, thanks for the comment and glad u liked it! :D

on Apr. 4 2010 at 12:00 am
Denmark DIAMOND, Sacramento, California
53 articles 55 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our Deepest Fear is not that we are inadequate, our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure"

simple yet beautiful.i love the rain too=) the sound gives me peace of mind.


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