Remember Me MAG

March 11, 2010
By Anonymous

Do you remember me? I'm the girl
You knocked down in the hall.
You were in a rush, and I guess
I must have blended in with the wall.
Is that what happened? Or is it
You were moving just too fast
And all the things you're rushing by,
Do you know what you've gone past?
Do you remember me? I'm the girl
Who laughed, the girl who can do no wrong.
I'm the girl who can't do anything,
Who never will belong.
Or am I mistaken?
Was that role taken,
By all the girls told that they're “unique”?
Let's be honest, it's a synonym for “freak.”
At least, that's what we think
And the magazines claim –
So now, the truth, the revolution,
It's time to proclaim:
I screw up, and I'm messed up,
I see a shrink, and that's okay.
I don't fit the perfect picture
That we all try to portray.
Do you remember me? I'm leading
A revolution starting now.
If you remember me,
We'll change the world, I vow.
Will you remember me? Or more importantly,
Will you remember what I've said?
I may only be a fleeting star,
One day, I will grow cold.
But if you look up to the stars tonight
You'll see more than pinpricks of light
Wisdom shines and wisdom's released,
As you wish on a star that's deceased.
But it's okay, if you remember me,
Do you remember me? I'm here.
But one day when my light is gone,
Don't let me disappear.
Fading into walls, we bury ourselves
In the go-go-go rush, modern hurries.
Everyone needs to be told,
We share all the same worries.
Will they like me? Do I even
Matter to anyone? And will I
Live on to be happy or
Just go away after I die?
I hate this stress and this pain,
Depression, wonder if I'm sane.
I'm tired, and I only want to go to bed.
I've gotta do everything else instead.
I wonder if anyone else would agree
Or if no one will ever join me.
Are these everybody's thoughts,
Or am I the only one?
If you are like me, come and join me
The revolution's begun.
And we'll fight the modern world in sync,
And let free the secret thoughts we think.



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on Dec. 18 2011 at 11:31 pm
isimplywish BRONZE, Christchurch, Other
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Every word is so true! I love how it really flows from one bit to the next. It's amazing! You're amazing!

on Nov. 3 2011 at 8:28 pm
lilovebug905598 BRONZE, Reynoldsburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, hears but not listen,and leaves before she is left."-wise girl

Wow thats exactly how I feel. So amazing.

on Nov. 1 2011 at 1:14 pm
kmanley PLATINUM, Loveland, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I feel infinite"

Thank you!

on Nov. 1 2011 at 10:40 am
ChoirGirl97 BRONZE, Coon Rapids, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
You dont know what you got till it's gone

woww... Just wow. I dont know what to say. That was amazing keep  up the great work

on Oct. 19 2011 at 11:15 pm
Haileyjphx BRONZE, Glendale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh as long as you'll live, and love as much as you breathe <3

BEAUTIFUL!!! <3

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on Oct. 15 2011 at 12:38 pm
-Duckie- GOLD, West Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Your heart is a weapon the size of your fist. Keep fighting. Keep loving.
-Anonymous

You should make it again!

on Oct. 15 2011 at 10:07 am
kmanley PLATINUM, Loveland, Ohio
34 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel infinite"

I used to but I have lost the music by now :(

-Duckie- GOLD said...
on Oct. 13 2011 at 7:38 pm
-Duckie- GOLD, West Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Your heart is a weapon the size of your fist. Keep fighting. Keep loving.
-Anonymous

This is truly amazing. Is there music, where can I get it? I'm dying to learn this.

Delila72 said...
on Oct. 7 2011 at 5:32 pm
Delila72, Henderson, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, throw the lemons back in life's face and demand cupcakes.

This poem is simply amazing. I read it in my english class a couple weeks ago, and it truely inspired me. I haven't been able to forget the first lines since I read it. This truely inspired me. Thank you so much.

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on Aug. 19 2011 at 10:25 pm
Katie1234 GOLD, Velva, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
"When life becomes more than you can stand; fall to your knees"
"To be normal is to be boring."
"You cannot make men good by law."
"Christians believe that Jesus Christ is the son of God because He said so."
"To be a Christian means to forgive the inexcusable, because God has forgiven the inexcusable in you."

This is perfection. I love you managed to point out that when girls are told they are unique, it's the same thing as saying they are a freak/ It's so true. Thank you for sharing this!

on Aug. 18 2011 at 3:10 pm
hippiechick123 GOLD, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
all who wander arent always aimless. where do you go to escape yourself? close your eyes and see me.
all you touch and all you see is all your life will ever be.
i am in love with you <3

This is amazing, I absolutely love it. You're very good at writing, Keep venting on paper

on Aug. 18 2011 at 10:55 am
HeavenlyPrincess SILVER, Watertown, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
live
love
laugh

THAT WAS BEUTIFUL :)

on Aug. 9 2011 at 1:14 am
iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody can make you feel inferior without their consent. -Eleanor Roosevelt

:) nvr loose ur heart for writing, ur talented

 


on Aug. 8 2011 at 10:19 pm
kmanley PLATINUM, Loveland, Ohio
34 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel infinite"

Thank you! It encourages me a lot to hear feedback like this :)

on Aug. 8 2011 at 5:43 pm
iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody can make you feel inferior without their consent. -Eleanor Roosevelt

this was awesome. i always say tht the best pieces of writting r found wen someone is in pain. it rly lets u actually feel it with them, tths how this was for me :)

on Jun. 3 2011 at 7:21 pm
millievm97 SILVER, Schoolcraft, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
The pen is mightier than the sword!

Wow. I am amazed and encouraged by your talent. There should be more people in the world that can at least write as half as good as you. 

on May. 13 2011 at 8:24 pm
BecauseImAspen DIAMOND, Bonner Springs, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
what can not be changed can wilt away or fade, but never will it be forgotten.

You're welcome. (:

on May. 12 2011 at 5:46 pm
kmanley PLATINUM, Loveland, Ohio
34 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel infinite"

thank you :)

 


on May. 12 2011 at 5:42 pm
kmanley PLATINUM, Loveland, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I feel infinite"

I didn't actually write out the chords, although I should have... by now I am starting to forget!

on May. 11 2011 at 9:32 pm
BecauseImAspen DIAMOND, Bonner Springs, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
what can not be changed can wilt away or fade, but never will it be forgotten.

This is very amazing. I don't have any words to describe it.


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