Holes

March 11, 2010
By AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani


What did they do to the poor souls
They are like ghosts hiding in holes
Gonna get you if they can
Gonna get you
Kill the good man
Cause they are the experts at holes
They dig them,build them,put them in molds
To disguise the reality of the holes
Got to get out while you still can
Or they'll take you down in their holes longer than
You can imagine and longer
You'll stay there at the bottom and wonder and wander
Holes,holes,holes
are dangerous brother



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on May. 15 2010 at 10:02 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

thanks so much I'm glad you like it!:)

Sultana GOLD said...
on May. 15 2010 at 9:47 pm
Sultana GOLD, Albertson, New York
10 articles 0 photos 17 comments
This is really awesome. I loved how you put "Gonna get you if they can / Gonna get you / Kill the good man" early on in this. It made me want to rush through it, thus causing this lovely sense of urgency and truth. Well done.

on May. 10 2010 at 8:21 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

thanks:)I love playing this on my guitar......

on May. 6 2010 at 8:14 am
Ebony_Rose PLATINUM, Hot Springs, Arkansas
21 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The simplest way that i can understand therapy is that we're born a certain
way, we're taught to be something different, and we spend our whole lives
trying to unravel it and ultimately align ourselves with who we really are." ~Billy Corgan

I like it... There is definitly feelings put into the words.. :)

on Apr. 16 2010 at 11:23 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

thank you so much and good advice about the punctuation, I'll keep that in mind for the future!:)

on Apr. 15 2010 at 8:56 pm
simplieme SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments
Oh I really like this one the repetition of rhymes helps it to really connect well. I would maybe add some punctuation; comas and what not but not to much that it, you know, becomes choppy. Love the last line too and how it stands out


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