Surrender..

March 4, 2010
By BarelyHoldingOn BRONZE, Hobbs, New Mexico
BarelyHoldingOn BRONZE, Hobbs, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Stand for something or you'll fall for Anything


I try so hard…
To stand my ground.
I do my best,
To walk upright.
I strive and strive..
To be perfect.
I try, I fail.
Now here I am again.

I’m
Falling on my knees,
Hands raised high.
I surrender all of me.

Lord, You know..
My one desire is to Be like You.
Yet, It’s been so long..
Since I’ve asked You for help,
Now..
My Strength is quickly fading.
My heart’s beat grows weak..
My soul is slipping further away,
And MY tears are all I see.

So, Here I am..

Falling on my knees,
Hands raised high.
I surrender all of me.

Lord , Now I know…

Without your Loving Hands,
I am simply Weak.
Without your Consuming Fire,
My heart will cease to beat.
Without your Healing Power,
My life would still be broken.
Without your Son; Jesus,
My soul, alone….
Will have no Home

So once again, Here I am..

Falling on my knees,
Hands raised high.
Oh God,
Take all of Me.


The author's comments:
We try to fix things on our own.. we try to be perfect.. please everybody... but REALLY... ONLY GOD.. can help us.. and change us.. :) Once we surrender.. he does the rest

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Milo! said...
on Apr. 3 2010 at 6:25 pm
This is really good. It’s easy to relate to, and interesting to read. Keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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