March 1, 2010
By aide1116 BRONZE, Gary, Indiana
aide1116 BRONZE, Gary, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
" A journey of a thousand mile's starts with one single step"

this isn't the way I wanted things to you actin like you own me but you know you can't control me.


it's like suffication no

breathin an it aint goin

down no more. cuz that's

so old.
you hold on to me like ther's no tomarrow never forget it could all end in pieces. and it's like no breathen leavin is my last resort. i don't wanna but i gotta do this

you know it shouldn't end like this we could have one last chance but i'm afraid it's much to late for you to mend your mistake.

This is the last time I let a man hurt me like that. i need my life i need my friends. i need it all and that's the end.

The author's comments:
this is something that happened to me in real life. hope you can relate to this and if u cant ur lucky u havent experienced it yet.

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Milo! said...
on Apr. 3 2010 at 6:26 pm
This is really good. It’s easy to relate to, and interesting to read. Keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

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