Everything Is Over

March 6, 2010
By baumshell DIAMOND, Burbank, California
baumshell DIAMOND, Burbank, California
68 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was thinking how nothing lasts and what a shame that is."-Benjamin Button


I don't want to write these words
because I don't want to think these thoughts
but how can I not think? when it surrounds me
everywhere I go

I can't stop feeling it
the pain and the love exist
And such little time ago
It seems so long, long ago
I held what I loved in my hand
but it slipped through the spaces, never to come back again

Everything is over
It's done for
It's gone

Everything that is, now was
in the past
and I can't go back

Everything is over
It's done
I'm finished for the end

Everything is over
How can I relive a touch, a feeling?
It's done, done
And I can't go back

It will happen all over again
Fall apart all over again
Experience the happiness,the joy,
then the love,
followed by pain
here to choke me down
again...

It will happen all over again
all over again
The same thing, the same thing
But I'm better off in the end

How can you tell me I'm better now? than before
Everything in pieces on the ground
How can you tell me I'm better now? than before
Better now, now broken
on the floor

I get what I want but I never wanted this
I get what I want but I never wanted this
I get what I want but I never wanted this



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on Nov. 5 2012 at 6:27 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Wow, that's gorgeous. It's so meaningful and really touched my heart. Great job!

on May. 13 2012 at 9:21 pm
DaleTheWhale BRONZE, Tipp City, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You weren't put on this earth to be ordinary."

Really liked it. Check out my song Too Much To Ask For, comment and rate please :)

tevoRocks said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 5:32 pm
i agree T.C. can you reply please i get lonely

on Sep. 14 2011 at 4:49 pm
brianbrasfield1997 SILVER, Mexico, New Mexico
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I think you did a good job but when I read it I could see it happen but I couldn't really feel the emotion like other writers do with there work. I hope you practice alot. No hard feelings, just an honest opinion. (:

on Aug. 23 2011 at 1:17 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

nightstalker part three, four, and five is now out! Go check it out if you liked the first and second! :)(:

on Jun. 18 2011 at 11:03 am
talkingcupcake BRONZE, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
say it... out loud

i love it and please can some one check my stuff its called come on baby

on May. 27 2011 at 4:50 pm
RC_of_emotions GOLD, Star City, Arkansas
18 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
BOMB DIGGETY!!!!!

Loved this! I can relate in a small way

on May. 27 2011 at 11:08 am
shunshiine7 BRONZE, Brodnax, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
todays problems are not tomorrows worries.

i really enjoyed reading this poem very touching. i love it.

on Mar. 23 2011 at 8:54 am
TeenageParadise_114, Cary, North Carolina
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perfectly written (: love this poem and can't stop reading it

on Mar. 22 2011 at 1:10 pm
MissAnthrope BRONZE, Bristol, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't a game, there's no undo button.

It flows beautifully, definitey one of my favourite song lyrics I've read on here :)

Angel1234 said...
on Feb. 28 2011 at 12:51 pm
Angel1234, Millwaukee, Wisconsin
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Peace,love,harmony,would i suceed or fail,strong,weak,broken,I am no longer a drug, you cant take a person and use them, love hate, and trust, im a beautiful melody, conquer, horror beauty, I am no antique, Magic surrounds you, your aura is great"

LOVE this song! you should keep going. Its beautifly written

on Feb. 28 2011 at 9:16 am
Kelcey123 BRONZE, State Center, Iowa
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I love that I can relate to this. This piece is very moving, it's great.

on Feb. 28 2011 at 12:34 am
LearningToFall BRONZE, Hastings, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Give me something worth believing; all the truth in cliches died,
Write my name on all your bullets; so I can pay for all the lies.

What was it you never wanted? Because this is a song I could sing to myself over and over again... If only I knew the tune.

This is beautiful - Keep Writing More!! :)


x0x0xJ SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2011 at 2:14 pm
x0x0xJ SILVER, Wood Dale, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the thoughts in my head get bored and go for a stroll out through my mouth. This is rarely a good thing.

I don't want to write these words because I don't want to think these thoughts- favorite line. :)

on Jan. 15 2011 at 3:42 pm
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Dreaming is what makes the world go round"

this is really good! i could hear this on the radio someday =) please comment or rate my stuff. thanks! =)

jojo8 said...
on Nov. 10 2010 at 10:54 am
that is a really good song i loved it nice job

IansLover GOLD said...
on Sep. 5 2010 at 1:49 am
IansLover GOLD, Otisco, Indiana
19 articles 9 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Moshimo anata kanarazu no naka de ai... ai to issho ni anata no kokoro soshite tamashii."

(translation: If you fall in love.... Love with your heart and soul.)

I love how this can be taken in so many different ways. It's very well written and your use of words is impressive :) good work

on Aug. 14 2010 at 5:59 pm
mvanzuylen BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
1 article 6 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgement that something else is more important than fear. ~Ambrose Redmoon

WOW i really love this!

Danica SILVER said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 2:33 pm
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore

This was great; really powerful.  I can totally hear music with it :)

juliette said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 10:20 am
juliette, Gdynia, Other
0 articles 1 photo 18 comments
i really love the end of it... kind of reminds me of paramore. it's quite deep, great to relate to. good work!


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