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counting the days
as they go by
and i cant help but
wonder why

i cant find
that glistening
that use to be
in your eyes


and yes
somethings changed

and no
your not the saame

and i cant help butthink
thats its all because of me
is it that icant make you
feel happy

or maybe is it my way
i say i love you babe
and then knowing, i ask you
do you love me too

...to be continuedd...



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kayykayy said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 4:19 pm:
omg thats great! wowzz! like your gf is sooo lucky! and yeah with the way u seem this girlie prolly loves you right back! if not shes crazzy!! hah >.< later holla...lol :D peace
 
chris-the writer replied...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 4:28 pm :
hah yeaa...shes my exnow...i love her..she loves me..butt we need a lil time for things to get better...**) thank for the feedback
 
LovelyMiss This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 4:26 pm :
I love how you rhyme its like you don't even try! Like you just went with it! Keep writting ur really good!
 
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