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He's A Rainbow

His smile is the sunshine
His smile is a golden ray
His smile is a circle of heaven
Warmth on a cold day

It makes his perfect eyes shine
It’s like a candle flame
It’s something you can stare at
A bright heart it contains

I don’t know how to describe it
It’s that warm and fuzzy feeling
It’s a tingle through your fingertips
It’s the glances you’ve been stealing

His smile is the sunshine
But this you already know
Of course his laugh will be the rain
So together it’s a rainbow



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~*)Wish(*~ said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 3:36 pm:
this made my day! BEAUTIFUL!
 
Laughternchoclate replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 4:16 pm :
Aww thank you!!!
 
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Laughternchoclate said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 11:20 am:
Sorry that last commet was 2 another prsn :)
 
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little-miss-sunshine said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 9:59 am:
This is really cute. I especially like the last stanza. I like how it flows.
 
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Laughternchoclate said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 1:48 pm:
lol thanks! Yeah it probly wud make me 2 but i got bored so yep!
 
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Nikiblue said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 6:10 pm:
Cute! <3 Its so innocent and pure and yet so adorable haha Great job (:
 
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Laughternchoclate said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 5:17 pm:
Shoot! This isn't a song lyric it's just a poem haha
But thanks for the comment!!
 
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chocolateharp said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 4:27 pm:
This is so sweet; it made my smile. :)
 
lovespromise replied...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 2:03 pm :

This is really good! I love the way you compared a guy to a rainbow. Really awesome!

 

 
Laughternchoclate replied...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 3:09 pm :
Thank you :)
 
Collin13 replied...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 4:43 pm :
hey i like ur poem!! do u know how long it takes for something ive written to be done pending? how long does it usually take?
 
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