Perfect Place

February 16, 2010
By PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..


I come
to this tree
where you first told me
those words,
only three,
but truthfully sweet.
"I love you" is what I heard.
I'm leaning
against the bark,
and that spark
do you light.
The wind blows,
and my hair flows.
Perfect Place.
Don't need
any more space.
Years have come,
and years have gone
since that day.
Our tree
hasn't stayed the same.
It's gotten older,
and it gently sways.
It falls,
but it's still.......
Our PERFECT PLACE!!!!!


The author's comments:
This poem is about the one place that i truly enjoy for the fact that my ex (who i still love) told me he first loved me...

!!!Randy!!!




<3 Mal

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on Dec. 3 2010 at 4:35 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

Update::: He's Mine Again!!

on Apr. 1 2010 at 7:49 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

This is sooooo sweet! You are an excellent poet! If you get the chance, may you please comment on my work too? Thanks so much

Katrselyn said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:22 pm
Katrselyn, Kankakee, Illinois
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Love it so catchy sweet and not dry!

on Mar. 6 2010 at 2:12 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

brilliant! this poem shows sooo much emotion! i am in love with it! it is great! congratulations on the talent!

on Feb. 25 2010 at 10:41 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

Thanks!!! It just really came from the heart!!!

on Feb. 25 2010 at 2:52 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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This is so sweet! I love it! 5 out of 5! If you would like, come by and check out some of my poems. I would highly appreciate it! Thanks and thanks again for this amazing poem! I love this! Keep it up!

on Feb. 23 2010 at 9:15 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This is really free verse, I just clicked on the wrong one...


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