Perfect Place

February 16, 2010
I come
to this tree
where you first told me
those words,
only three,
but truthfully sweet.
"I love you" is what I heard.
I'm leaning
against the bark,
and that spark
do you light.
The wind blows,
and my hair flows.
Perfect Place.
Don't need
any more space.
Years have come,
and years have gone
since that day.
Our tree
hasn't stayed the same.
It's gotten older,
and it gently sways.
It falls,
but it's still.......

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PoetLaureate07 said...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 4:35 pm
Update::: He's Mine Again!!
elfiewrites said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 7:49 pm
This is sooooo sweet! You are an excellent poet! If you get the chance, may you please comment on my work too? Thanks so much
X0RoKoX0 said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 4:22 pm
Love it so catchy sweet and not dry!
alicecullen said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 2:12 pm
brilliant! this poem shows sooo much emotion! i am in love with it! it is great! congratulations on the talent!
calephchad said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 2:52 pm
This is so sweet! I love it! 5 out of 5! If you would like, come by and check out some of my poems. I would highly appreciate it! Thanks and thanks again for this amazing poem! I love this! Keep it up!
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 10:41 pm
Thanks!!! It just really came from the heart!!!
PoetLaureate07 said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 9:15 am
This is really free verse, I just clicked on the wrong one...
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