Why Do I Feel So Alone?

February 5, 2010
By xXOneWishXx BRONZE, Sewell, New Jersey
xXOneWishXx BRONZE, Sewell, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Most people wish for Money, Success, Fame, but my One and Only wish was for you to be happy, even if it means i'm not.


Why do I feel so alone? I’m not so sure that I can really make it
All this stuff going wrong how am I suppose to take it
My mom’s about to leave me and I ain’t suppose to say sh*t
Nothing left to do but just to grit my teeth and fake it,
I can’t take it; I’m going out my mind.
Every time something is right it just gets messed up every time
If I could start my life back over maybe hit rewind
I could make it all so better no more messing up this time

The author's comments:
Its only a start, needs to be a lot longer and a lot better, its my way to vent and try to get back into music. I also Had to censor it somewhat. Not just the start but many words where changed to be put up here.

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on Mar. 6 2010 at 6:42 pm
xXOneWishXx BRONZE, Sewell, New Jersey
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Most people wish for Money, Success, Fame, but my One and Only wish was for you to be happy, even if it means i'm not.

repost the link, it won't open :/

on Feb. 24 2010 at 7:32 pm
edwardcullen4always SILVER, Rock Hill, South Carolina
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"If you feed a man a fish you feed him for a day, but if you teach a man to fish you feed him for a lifetime."

Wow that was really touching. Kind of reminds me of me.

on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:58 pm
xxMissingyouxx GOLD, Newfield, New Jersey
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"love is like a butterfly, hold it too close, it'll crush.. hold it too loose, it'll fly away"

ohmigosh g thats awsome!! keep on writin youll be alrite trust me ..no ones taking my biff from mee!!!

on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:51 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

this is good and could totally be made into a song! check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/166901/Night/


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