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No one knows me,
no one hears me,
no one sees me anymore.
They think they know me,
but they don't know me,
I keep my life to myself.

When did I build,
these walls around me?
Will there ever be,
someone who can save me?
Who will melt the ice
and let my river flow?
Who will know?



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Jeera said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 2:57 pm:
Cool and thansk :)
 
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Kaitbryn said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 8:29 pm:
NOT WEIRD!!!! I was talking to my youth director the other day and we started talking about just that!! No one knows the whole me, the complete me. I have out walls around my self and only show people the "me" they need to see at that moment!!
I totally get what your saying, in fact you should check out my post "walls" i9t is alot like this
 
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*StandardToaster* said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 7:48 pm:
this is really deepm and could definately be made in to a really good song! check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/176118/Miss-High-and-Mighty/
 
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